I just realised how depressing this fic is. I mean, given the canons it was hardly going to be kittens and rainbows, but still. IT IS DONE. \o/ Thanks to everyone for reading, and for putting up with the longer-than-expected gaps. It's been so interesting hearing how the story runs from the outside. Many thanks also, again, to my marvellous co-
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I loved how everything came together into a plan that takes them forward. I loved the relationship between Ruth and Tariq. I absolutely loved - and felt awful about - the nod towards Harry, and what lies ahead for him. Jo and Lucas smoking together! Malcolm and Tariq getting on so well! Jo's anger at Zaf, because she couldn't possibly take in more despair! Tom Quinn never being able to come back!
This whole world, you've constructed it so thoroughly. The section with the people in the marketplace was horrible; Ruth running out to Tom was wry and sad; Harry sitting on the floor by Nikki's bed where she'd chosen to go with some semblance of dignity was poignant.
Ahhhh, so good. I love coming to the end of something and feeling that good, solid weight in my gut, knowing that it was well-told. Excellent, excellent job, girls. This was brilliant, and well worth the wait.
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I can't believe it's actually done! Now I will finally be able to concentrate on my ficathonfic, I hope. And catch up with reading other people's fic!
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(I AM JOKING. AM I?)
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