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Jul 23, 2007 17:40

Hello, everyone! I just joined the community, and come bearing fanfiction. I'm looking forward to being a part of this group, and I hope you all enjoy!

Title: Beautiful Day
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Bee muses.

What you don't have you don't need it now )

pg-rated, fic

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devilishkurumi July 23 2007, 22:37:36 UTC
This makes me feel so warm and fuzzy, like you have no idea. Absolutely fluffy warm and loverly! So in character and introspective and yeah, I'm gonna stop before I start babbling.

Extreme Red Light-Green Light. Somehow Ratchet always managed to win that one.
Haha, somebody's using his vehicle's added on benefits to cheat!

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 10:48:14 UTC
Aww, but I like it when people babble incoherently! ^_^ I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story.

As for Extreme Red Light-Green Light, well, I'm sure that Ratchet is used to using his add-ons for cheating in one way or another. XD

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discord2chaos July 23 2007, 23:00:44 UTC
I love Sam in this When Sam learned of this slightly OCD behavior, he began to ask things like, “What is the sound of one hand clapping?” and “How is a raven like a writing desk?” And not to mention that one afternoon when there was a bad thunderstorm, and Bee had calmly explained that Sam should turn off his computer, not take a shower, and have candles ready in case of a power outage-Sam did, of course, do what he was told. And then he promptly ran outside into the yard carrying a roll of aluminum foil and shouting into the sky: “Shock me!” pure gold. This was totally awesome

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 10:49:23 UTC
Thank ya very much! Sam was an absolute blast to write, even if it was from such an outside perspective. I'll have to play around with him some more and see what happens. I'm happy that you liked it!

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evil_dm July 23 2007, 23:05:33 UTC
There are no words for how much I love this piece. You crawl into all their heads at once, yet it's seen from Bee's unique perspective. And I love the references to all the classic lit and philosophy. *Happy*

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 10:51:25 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! At first, I was really worried about writing from Bee's perspective--how do you get into the head of a 16' alien robot? But he lends himself up quite nicely. And I also have a weakness for classic lit. You'll probably see it pop often in my stuff. I'm glad you're happy. XD

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ani_coolgirl July 23 2007, 23:12:08 UTC
Oh wow, I loved that. Very deep and sweet to the max. Earth pwns to the max. Gotta love our big blue 'n green mother.

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 10:52:45 UTC
Earth does pwn to an uber max level. I'm glad you liked it! ^_^

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millionshards July 23 2007, 23:27:52 UTC
*flails* Beautiful! Beautiful! *gushes*

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 10:54:13 UTC
Careful! Don't hurt yourself flailing! (and I speak from experience on this one--trust me) XD I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story! Thank ya very much. ^_^

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