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Jul 23, 2007 17:40

Hello, everyone! I just joined the community, and come bearing fanfiction. I'm looking forward to being a part of this group, and I hope you all enjoy!

Title: Beautiful Day
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Bee muses.

What you don't have you don't need it now )

pg-rated, fic

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 10:55:44 UTC
Oh, wow, thank you very much! High praise, indeed. I'm glad that I was able to capture Bumblebee's voice for you. I was worried about writing from his perspective at first, but it seems to have turned out all right. Thank you for reading!

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hollyberry2900 July 23 2007, 23:35:54 UTC
I love the part near the end where Sam is walking out the door with the Pop-Tart... It's the simple, everyday moments that can remind you of how much you love someone :3

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 10:58:12 UTC
The Pop-Tart scene was actually my favorite one to write. I think I was waiting the whole fic to get to it. ^_^ And yes, I believe it's the simple things that can remind you of your love. Intensity is great and all that, and I'm a sucker for pr0n, but sometimes nothing can beat just hanging out quietly together as though you've always done so and always will.

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yukihoshino July 23 2007, 23:41:51 UTC
A funny/sad part about this is that I have been known to do stuff like running around in a thunderstorm with metal ...
The whole idea of Ironhide or Optimus Prime trying to pop bubble wrap though was glorious!

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 11:00:21 UTC
Lol. Nice. I hope that the lightning did not shock you. Though, I imagine it would make an awesome story to tell other people. "Hey, you know what happened to me the other day? I was struck by lightening." Yes. Awesome.

I love the mental image of Optimus and Ironhide trying to pop bubblewrap. I can only hope that it doesn't become as addictive to them as it has to me. Forget the super high-quality technology inside the box! Give me the bubblewrap! And then I can be amused for hours on end.

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yukihoshino July 25 2007, 06:01:46 UTC
Hey once the bubble wrap is done you'll always have the box and all it's cardboard wonders!!!

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bionic July 23 2007, 23:55:04 UTC
So very awesome and touching. I love Bee's perspective which is completely in character and believable. Loved it!

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 11:01:52 UTC
*squeals* Oh, you have no idea how much the phrase "in character and believable" means to me! Everytime I read/write, believability is a huge issue with me, and I have spent days arguing with characters over it. That I was able to achieve it for you gives me one of those "high on life" feelings that everyone keeps talking about. ~_^ Glad you liked it!

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lyzzle July 24 2007, 00:31:08 UTC
Absolutely beautiful. It was deep and introspective without becoming melodramatic and cliche, with just the right amount of humor to balance it out. Just reading this fic made me all happy and fuzzy. ♥

Welcome to the community, and thanks for the fic~

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lady_oneiros July 24 2007, 11:03:52 UTC
Thank ya! But you know, I try my best to avoid cliches like the plague. ~_^ I'm glad you're happy and fuzzy now, that was my goal with this piece. Thanks for the welcome, and I'm sure I'll enjoy it muchly.

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