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Sparks 6

Jan 03, 2008 03:00

Title: Sparks (6)
Pairing BeexSam (with others developing)
Rating: M
Disclaimer: I don’t own Transformers. Hasbro does. All characters are 18 or older with the exception of Annabelle.
This has been beta'd but nobody's perfect. Comments and Critiques are welcomed and encouraged.
Thanks!

A:N This fic has been my baby for a while now and I really ( Read more... )

spark, rated-m, fic

Comments 11

winnterflake January 4 2008, 10:01:07 UTC

I <3 this story so much!^^

The way you switch to everyone's point of view in the story, (as events are unfolding), is terrific and really interesting. All the characterizations are wonderful.<3

Mikaela, Bee, and Miles are awesome. Love how you wrote the trio as having a crush on Sam. That's an interesting idea that I don't think anyone's really written about. All THREE of them....poor Sam...he doesn't stand a chance.XD
Also, I love how you wrote Mikaela and Miles as real people instead of Bitchy!Mikaela and BarelyMentioned!Miles.

----I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to be happening next!
Awesome fic!:D

yuuzaiden January 4 2008, 10:26:30 UTC

Thank you some much!
I tend to get bored with just reading about one person all the time so I like bouncing from one character to the next with overlaping incidents and bringing it all together with something random.
As for Sam,I love him to bits!
He's a catalyst so it stands to reason people will be drawn to him.
No he really doesn't stand a chance does he?
Don't worry neither does anyone else.

joyfullscroll August 14 2008, 15:21:57 UTC

Oh I loved the humour in this chapter! Trent needs to be taken down a peg or 5! Guess Chromia won't be his 'bunny' anymore! *laughs* Because I really really can't see him being taken into the Autobot fold because of how he treated Sam and Miles all those years. Bee will squish him first.

As for what Sam is going through now *winches* Will he survive it?