Sparks 6

Jan 03, 2008 03:00

 Title: Sparks (6)
Pairing BeexSam (with others developing)
Rating: M
Disclaimer: I don’t own Transformers. Hasbro does. All characters are 18 or older with the exception of Annabelle. 
This has been beta'd but nobody's perfect. Comments and Critiques are welcomed and encouraged.
Thanks!

A:N This fic has been my baby for a while now and I really ( Read more... )

spark, rated-m, fic

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mimi_sardinia January 3 2008, 09:36:35 UTC
Chromia is Trent's car.

XD

Nice that Mikaela has made friends with Longarm - was he a product of the Allspark's release when Sam dropped it?

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yuuzaiden January 3 2008, 10:22:38 UTC
I figured she'd be a cute addition and Trent was pratically begging to be knocked down a peg.

As for Long Arm, yes he was.
I was bouncing around few sites and found him as part of the "All Spark power" line of toys.
I laughed then I had an idea.
I think he's cute...that and hes had previous experience with Mikaela's driving.

Thanks and keep reading

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pennieblack January 3 2008, 09:57:40 UTC
Gosh, that was an exciting chapter!

"Bunny?" he repeated dumbly from his robotic induced stupor. She laughed leaning close enough for him see his own startled reflection in her panels. The bright optics flicker in what he assumed was a wink.

"Yeah honey?"

You've killed me dead with amazingness.
(And sympathetic cringing over poor Sam. D:)

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yuuzaiden January 3 2008, 10:25:42 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!
I figured if Trent oves his car that much... he's got to call it pet names....Thus "Bunny"

I have more in store for Sam as well, things always seem worse before they get better..
Thanks for reading!

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yuuzaiden January 3 2008, 16:41:43 UTC
Thanks for the comments.
The decepticons are evil and I was tired of seeing things whre they were downplayed in favor of Autobots. They are a major part of the story.

As for Mikaela and Miles,I want to see them grow as people and not just extentions of Sam or the Autobots.

Chromia seemed the best choice for Trent. I love the characters and I figured they be fun together. Ironhide's reaction?
We'll see how it goes...
Thanks for the comments

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yuuzaiden January 4 2008, 10:14:28 UTC
Squee!!!
He just is!!
I love them so much!!
Must remmber this is Sam/Bee fic... hehe
Don't worry Chromia and I are well aware of the hotness of those two mechs.
Heh

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mmouse15 January 4 2008, 05:26:35 UTC
Total <3 for this chapter!

Chromia - fantastic! Love her response to Trent, love how she reveals herself - just wonderful. And Miles rocks in this chapter. Finally coming into his own.

Really like Long Arm and Mikeala - really, really like.

Looking forward to more...

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yuuzaiden January 4 2008, 10:20:20 UTC
Thanks!
I found myself liking Trent more and more as i wrote this chapter, Chromia just seemed so perfect. I just had to use her.
I love Mikaela,and I hate to see people bash her or ignore her completely!
Long Arm just seemed to fit.
Don't worry I've got more planned.

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