Fic: That Still Small Voice Chapter Two

[lady_oneiros]

Sorry for the wait on this chapter. It took forever, since it fought me every step of the way. I hope you enjoy!

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.

Summary: Sam has been pulled deeper into the conflict than anyone realized

Comments

[winnterflake]

WOW...Awesome fic. I love your writing style and the way you insert this incredibly absorbing sense of unease and mystery throughout the story.
---Can't wait to see what happens next! *bites nails* :D

[lady_oneiros]

Thank ya! *bows* XD As for what happens next, I'm not entirely sure either, so I'm sure I'll be just as surprised as you are. However, chapter three seems like it's going to put up less of a fight than two, so it should be up soon!

[evil_dm]

I've been waiting for this update--I actually mentioned it to Denelle yesterday, wondering when or if Chapter Two was coming. I'm glad to see it's here, and just as awesome as Chapter One. Keep it up!

[lady_oneiros]

Love your icon.

I'm glad that you liked this chapter! As I mentioned in another comment, chapter three seems like it's going to be less stubborn than this one, so I should have it up more quickly than I did this one. ^_^

[bionic]

Love this chapter - and your writing is fabulous. Yes, I second the undercurrent of creepy that runs through it, and that's part of what makes reading it so interesting and enjoyable. Keep up the great work!

[lady_oneiros]

*bounces* Glad you like it, and thanks for reading! I'm happy that you like the creepiness...I tend to be better at writing darker stuff, so fluff is way out of my league. ~_^

[teacup_werewolf]

*brain died*

Wow...make me your student plz!

[lady_oneiros]

Oh no! Don't brain die! There's still chapter three to come! ~_^ As for students, tuition is: bring a box of Chips Ahoy! chewy chocolate chip cookies each lesson. If you can manage that, I'm sure we can arrange something. ^_^

[teacup_werewolf]

How bout SamXBee pron would that work :3

[lady_oneiros]

I suppose that could be an acceptable substitute. XD

[rianax]

I have been impatient for your story. Your story has the most potiental to move me, more than any other one I have come across. You plunk me into Sam's spastic head (exit stage right) and chill me with the whispers of the dark little man who isn't there.

You make Megatron into a true menance rather a simple brute.

I can't wait to see how you expand the cast.

[lady_oneiros]

Ack! Sorry for the late response! I'm really glad that you like the story. Sam is a lot of fun to write, but he can be a little difficult, since I want to make sure I have him right.

I have always thought that the sheer evilness of Megatron is somewhat downplayed in fanfiction. The war has lasted as long as it has for a very good reason.

Thanks! ^_^

[rianax]

Sure Megatron was evil-- but he wasn't smart at least in the G1 version. Not the chilling darkness you get from true monsters like Hannibal, Xanthos from Gargoyles, or any villan that actually is given some depth.

[lady_oneiros]

This is true. But I couldn't really expect him to be smart with that annoyingly nasal/high pitched voice of his. I want to see if I can make Megatron a bit....more. Should prove interesting, in the very least.