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ezran August 11 2007, 23:23:31 UTC
omg. omg!! dear lord! That is a lot of orgasms. >> Holy crap!

Great smut, loved it. :D Sooooo looking forward to more chapters.

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neku August 12 2007, 12:38:53 UTC
nice chapter <3 LOL@ ratchet ...coming out

...the last couple of paragraphs where their "lust" turned into something more was my OTL <3

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lupin_stargazer August 18 2007, 07:51:00 UTC
"He even thought he might have heard Ratchet coming to check on them, but by that point he wouldn't have cared if the whole gang of Autobots had settled down to watch."

That line cracked me up! The mental picture of Ratchet,Optimus and Ironhide sitting around guzzling gasoline and watching Sam and Bee going at it just killed me! Please update soon, i'm loving this fic!

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