Forsaken [3]

[beeswaxing]

Title: Forsaken
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, supernatural
Prompt: Adopted the prompt by kpopbee and written with her permission.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here :P

Summary: There is a war

Comments

[hra_1106]

spot.. hehe ..

[hra_1106]

i don't want to be touched or seen by this Jaejoong,
touch and you die.. yunho so possessive
jaejoong's feeling that he was dangerous to the surrounding .. so sad, but that for his protection
i wish i had that destiny/ power/curse, just for mosquitoes, i do not want to close or touch by them
and yunho behind all this smut recently XDD .. yunho is great seduction

[beeswaxing]

Yes, you wouldn't... Yunho has taken possessive to an entirely new level. But then, I cannot actually blame him especially after seeing those airport photos of Jaejoong today omfg. Seriously, I died so hard my eyes crossed and my head spun and I puked pea soup ala The Exorcist...

*cough*

Anyway, Yunho is a bastard at seduction... he seduces me without doing anything. And then y'all get smut out of it. I guess it's a fair exchange? XD

[hra_1106]

yes.. jaejoong definitely gorgeous, oh my god.. i can't wait to see him in flesh, next month ><
last june, when junsu held concert here, i'm greeted him at the airport with other fans, and thank's god, i could touch junsu arm as he walked in front of me, his skin is so smooth and hmmm i love his fragrant
and now, i'm so curious how about Jaejoong's , because the other said that jaejoong skin is more beautiful
yunho is so sexy, handsome, manly, tall, etc, etc .. and ahh also changmin *_* ..
and i'm sure, i'm not the only one, who's happy that with his seduction, you can write all this smut *wink wink*

[beeswaxing]

LOL :D

[beeswaxing]

Hehe it's ok. Hope you liked it ;-)

[muramatsu_aoi]

yaay!!

[muramatsu_aoi]

a part of me is spazzing at how over protective yunho can be.. on the other hand, the atmosphere created gives me chills down my spine..

Jiyoung & yunho were lovers once upon a time? 0_0

ahhh.. i wouldn't call the smut being repetitive dear.. while Sleeping Beauty was intense and loving ; this time around it's almost brutal.. Gives me Slept So Long feels, but since Yunho is supernatural, his body can do damn well what it pleases <3

a part of me feels bad for jae next morning, when he is going to think this was a wet dream.. XD

[beeswaxing]

Yunho is not protective. He is a fucking possessive bastard lol. But hey, I am sooooooooo not complaining. He can go all possessive on my ass anytime. Too bad i'm a girl and he doesn't swing my way OTL But Jae's ass is the best ass out there so i'm cool with it :P

And lol... yes indeed. Demons are the epitome of debauchery... a tiny little detail like being brothers is not going to stop them. And especially Yunho hahahaha... Jiyong didn't have much of a choice in that. Why do you think he prefers females? :P His ass thanks him lmfao.

I've noticed that people compare my fics to SSL quite a bit. Sometimes I feel like I will never live up to that fic hahaha. I really screwed myself over with that one as my first YunJae fic ever.

Mmmmm Jae... well, we'll see ;-)

[muramatsu_aoi]

i meant only the smut part. The throw-on-the-bed and punishing brutal sex yunjae enjoy here, don't think they normal people can do in RL.

and Sleeping Beauty has got a much bigger readership than SSL. with an idea that is so diametrically opposite to it. so you really shouldn't be feeling that way ^_^

[dilovesyunjae]

HOOOOOOO FARKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!! shit, this is epic! i can just picture it like a movie.DAmmiittt!!! Yunho is sooo hot!!!gahhh, i cant,just,what,shit. iof89weybtttt4rc78wtr782xb4678023

*faints*

[beeswaxing]

*sprinkles you with holy water*

[snow_meow]

I love all the smut in this chapter.
It's like when eating something it's flavor explodes in your mouth tantalizing all your senses.

I wonder what is the outcome of the second part of the prophecy.
I am sure there is a third and final part of the prophecy.
Prophecies usually comes in threes ^__^

[beeswaxing]

I'm sure i've said this before, but I actually dislike reading smut lol so I have no idea what business it is that I have writing it.

This fic will go wherever the muse takes me ;-)

[snow_meow]

LOL
For all your dislike in reading smut, you write really good smut
^^

Your muse must be on overdrive due to Yunho ;)

[beeswaxing]

Yunho... I need to muzzle him o_O