Forsaken [3]

Sep 28, 2012 17:05

Title: Forsaken
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, supernatural
Prompt: Adopted the prompt by kpopbee and written with her permission.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here :P

Summary: There is a war ( Read more... )

pairing:yunjae, fic:forsaken, nc17

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muramatsu_aoi September 28 2012, 05:35:06 UTC
yaay!!

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muramatsu_aoi September 28 2012, 06:24:07 UTC
a part of me is spazzing at how over protective yunho can be.. on the other hand, the atmosphere created gives me chills down my spine..

Jiyoung & yunho were lovers once upon a time? 0_0

ahhh.. i wouldn't call the smut being repetitive dear.. while Sleeping Beauty was intense and loving ; this time around it's almost brutal.. Gives me Slept So Long feels, but since Yunho is supernatural, his body can do damn well what it pleases <3

a part of me feels bad for jae next morning, when he is going to think this was a wet dream.. XD

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beeswaxing September 28 2012, 09:06:33 UTC
Yunho is not protective. He is a fucking possessive bastard lol. But hey, I am sooooooooo not complaining. He can go all possessive on my ass anytime. Too bad i'm a girl and he doesn't swing my way OTL But Jae's ass is the best ass out there so i'm cool with it :P

And lol... yes indeed. Demons are the epitome of debauchery... a tiny little detail like being brothers is not going to stop them. And especially Yunho hahahaha... Jiyong didn't have much of a choice in that. Why do you think he prefers females? :P His ass thanks him lmfao.

I've noticed that people compare my fics to SSL quite a bit. Sometimes I feel like I will never live up to that fic hahaha. I really screwed myself over with that one as my first YunJae fic ever.

Mmmmm Jae... well, we'll see ;-)

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muramatsu_aoi September 28 2012, 09:18:40 UTC
i meant only the smut part. The throw-on-the-bed and punishing brutal sex yunjae enjoy here, don't think they normal people can do in RL.

and Sleeping Beauty has got a much bigger readership than SSL. with an idea that is so diametrically opposite to it. so you really shouldn't be feeling that way ^_^

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beeswaxing September 28 2012, 22:11:07 UTC
Normal people can most assuredly do IRL. Most assuredly...

And yes I know SB has more readers than SSL lol but I have a few wistful people who have a very soft spot for that fic. My twin in particular lol. She hates SB but adores the fuck out of SSL and Forsaken :3

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