i feel it deep within, it’s just beneath the skin

Aug 11, 2012 16:46

i feel it deep within, it's just beneath the skin
Death is an art, something crafted meticulously out of beauty and want; a concept labelling a heart that’s stopped beating, a pulse that's stopped throbbing.
warning: might be triggering to those who practise self-harm
Like the spaces between words and holes punched out of hearts, it’s a quiet secret to carry. )

length: one-shot, fandom: ukiss, pairing: aj/kiseop, rating: pg-13

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keuriwoseo August 11 2012, 11:48:57 UTC
omg
SFGSZFCWSVFSX
can i just say that i love the way you write angst ;~~~;
this was just
omg
so creepy and beautiful at the same time ;AAA;
the way you described jaeseop cutting kiseop and and and
♡♡♡

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beefballs August 11 2012, 12:51:54 UTC
ahh thankyou tasha you flatter me ; a;♥

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myungbaekisses August 11 2012, 15:07:01 UTC
holy crap
okay i was just creeping on people and i came across your journal lmao but
i am so amazed at how beautiful (and creepy) you fit words together!! it's so mind-blowing endearing and you are really such a great author ;~~~;
it's so creepy but enticing at the same time lol i hope to read more of your works! ^^ ♡ bbyong~

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beefballs August 11 2012, 15:12:03 UTC
ahh you flatter me ; w;
thankyou so much ♥

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junjou_robotica August 11 2012, 19:42:30 UTC
wow, this is really...dark, obviously. but reading through it is like noise starting in the back of my head, and growing louder and louder before it breaks, right as Kiseop goes. I really liked it. ♥

(but, and I'm really sorry to have to bring this up, you kind of maybe need to warn for the content of this? Just because it's not obvious from the summary, and it might be painful for some people to have started reading it and then be faced with both the self-harm and the way Jaeseop harms Kiseop at his request.)

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beefballs August 12 2012, 05:38:01 UTC
thankyou so much for reading and i'm glad it had that effect? ♥
(sorry!!! omg askjhskajhfk added the warning alr)

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junjou_robotica August 12 2012, 08:00:38 UTC
it was good! really <3

(oh...where is it?)

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beefballs August 12 2012, 11:21:28 UTC
warning is put on my post in ukiss-fics n_n

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zoroyohgirl13 August 12 2012, 14:59:06 UTC
this...was so good. I love your writing style. Everything was just so haunting and *shivers*. I really really liked it.
Thank you for sharing.

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beefballs August 12 2012, 15:28:30 UTC
thankyou so much for reading ; a;♥

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pearlfuchsia August 12 2012, 22:50:09 UTC
Whooooooaaaaaaaaaaaa.
This seriously gave me the chills. Whenever I read fics involving cutting or blood I can't help but feel numb all over (idk why I decided to read this before bed).
Your writing style is absolutely lovely though. As weird as it may sound you made it all sort of...fascinating.
Amazing job ^^ hope you write more.

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beefballs August 13 2012, 13:01:20 UTC
eeeep you flatter me
thankyou so much for reading ; a;♥

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