Comments | beefballs: i feel it deep within, it’s just beneath the skin

beefballs

i feel it deep within, it’s just beneath the skin

Aug 11, 2012 16:46

i feel it deep within, it's just beneath the skin
Death is an art, something crafted meticulously out of beauty and want; a concept labelling a heart that’s stopped beating, a pulse that's stopped throbbing.
warning: might be triggering to those who practise self-harm
( Like the spaces between words and holes punched out of hearts, it’s a quiet secret to carry. )

length: one-shot, fandom: ukiss, pairing: aj/kiseop, rating: pg-13

Comments 21

adridalcorjac August 16 2012, 12:47:24 UTC

My skin crawled as I imagined the whole thing while reading it.. The way you wrote it was amazingly beautiful!
<3

beefballs August 16 2012, 13:43:53 UTC

ahh you flatter me ; a;
thankyou for reading ♥

xinhuiz August 19 2012, 12:51:31 UTC

ohmygad AJNZLWMXLDKCLSKV
SO
BEAUTIFULLY
WRITTEN
OHHHHHHHHH
I can't explain how nicely your words fit together and kiseop finding comfort in blood and blades and all omfg ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; and the way jaeseop is portrayed ;;;;;; ♥

beefballs August 19 2012, 12:55:30 UTC

omfg you flatter me screams askhkashfakf
thank you xinhui n__n♥

xinhuiz August 23 2012, 13:26:08 UTC

hehe I love your writing :3 no problem bb! ♥