Naruto - Means of Grace

Sep 23, 2007 15:27

Genre: Gen
Warnings: PG
Fandom: Naruto
Notes: I fscking love Kakuzu so much. God.
...suggest a title for me? Never mind.

madness in great ones must not unwatch'd go )

fandom: naruto, character: yugito, character: kakuzu, character: konan, character: hidan

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starstruck2 September 23 2007, 23:56:21 UTC
OMG *_*
That was....ugh, perfect. I love this so much...you got Kakuzu's character so nailed down it's incredible. And Hidan and Konan are perfect too...
And also, omfg:
Kakuzu might think his partner is, just a little, beautiful.

In the way of something that's bound to fall.

Not that he'd ever tell anyone.

*dies* Oh god...so beautiful.
♥♥

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starstruck2 September 23 2007, 23:57:21 UTC
ps. is it okay if i rec this in my journal?

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senri September 23 2007, 23:59:59 UTC
*brain explodes* UH YES! You can do whatever you like with this fic!

I've been admiring your Kakuzu and Hidan fic from afar for several weeks, and it was you that kind of got me thinking of... maybe a more relate-able side to Kakuzu? so. Gah. I'm so GLAD you like this, thank you so much! I'm really scared to write for the Naruto verse so THANK YOU for telling me I got it somewhat right. If you want to recc me I'm honored, seriously! <3

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starstruck2 September 24 2007, 00:07:05 UTC
YAY! I'm so glad you like my fic too :) This was amazing, seriously...I got chills :D I love writing Kakuzu with a more human side, and I love your interpretation...the backstory you've created for him is now, for me at least, canon.

Never be scared to write for Naruto again...this is about a million times better than most of the fic out there! Alright, I will recc this, because I know a lot of hardcore Kakuzu fans on my flist would completely adore this fic <3

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ex_cryoclai September 24 2007, 00:47:45 UTC
Oh god, this is so awesome. Seriosly, i really liked you characterization of Kakuzu, and his background. The relationship with Konan seems really interesting as well..And I loved the ending, ahdgasjkdas <333333 XD

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senri September 24 2007, 00:52:19 UTC
hahaha thanks so much...! The product of many hours of thought late at night, y'know?

I may flesh it out a little more, possibly with some other scenes with him and other Akatsuki members, before posting it to ff.net

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senri September 24 2007, 19:55:55 UTC
Oh eljay! I wish they had a comment back-up function like they do for journal entries. What can you do.

Aww thanks <3 <3 I'm really glad you liked this enough to mem it! Thanksss...

...AND SO I SEE YOU LIKE KAKUZU/TSUNADE. :D

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senri September 25 2007, 00:03:07 UTC
I know, right? =/ Oh wells.

Haha... hopefully more Naruto stuff will be forthcoming. I actually am poking at a Kakuzu/Tsunade fic actually, and maybe that will be posted sooner instead of later. But probably later. Ahah.

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lilydescend September 25 2007, 00:03:04 UTC
That was AMAZING!!! *___* Your characterization of Kakuzu was just... PERFECT! And the background you created - o___O - the whole idea of born in the sea, and by the sea... *shudders* (it instantly brought to my mind that Hokusai's print with a naked woman embraced by an octopus o_o)
But although you gave him him a nonhuman nature, you still managed to make him so human (Kakuzu liking citrus fruits? <333).

And what's incredible, despite such a daring interpretation (I think I wouldn't be able to accept the idea of "sea origins" if it wasn't so brilliantly written) you really did nail Kakuzu's character down. And not only his, the portrait of Hidan we get through Kakuzu's eyes is equally convincing. I think I've never read a fic that would show their partnership in a way that feels so... canon. I would LOVE to see more glimpses of their interactions *__*.

I'm completely enchanted with your fic <333. Thank you so much for sharing! *wants MORE!*

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senri September 25 2007, 00:16:00 UTC
Auugh, thanks so much for all your kind words! Y'warm my heart, seriously. <3 I'm so glad that all the random strange little details I concocted have been working for people.

And I'm glad his characterization works because a huge part of this thing was... a-hah... trying to work out how to characterize him. XD So whenever someone says it works I roll around squealing with glee.

Kakuzu just seems like a sea creature to me! Like that's where he'd fit in, and I think he'd be a horrifically awesome ocean predator don't you? He could just blast around... engulfing things.

I'll try to write more, hee hee! I have some Kakuzu crackfic that I want to write too :0 but I'm really trying to break the ice in this fandom, and get myself to work more on these under appreciated characters.

Also your journal header made me LAUGH SO HARD

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lilydescend September 25 2007, 15:09:06 UTC
Auugh, thanks so much for all your kind words! You're welcome :)
Seriously, it's one of the best fics I've ever read. And it's so excellently written - it gets better with every reading, savouring these exquisite sentences is pure pleasure *purrs*.
And the fact that it's centred around my favourite character makes it even better for me :).

I think he'd be a horrifically awesome ocean predator don't you? He could just blast around... engulfing things. XDD I'm sorry but the first thing that came to my mind was that ridiculous monster from "Creature from the Black Lagoon" XD
But Kakuzu as an ocean predator... The vision is so...uncanny. And fascinating *_*.

I'll try to write more, hee hee! I can't wait! :D

XD The picture in my header always cracks me up! And your fic adds new meaning to it XDD

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senri September 25 2007, 16:10:15 UTC
Dahhhh XD Thanks, thanks, thanks so much!

I don't know if you've ever read any HP Lovecraft, but in my head Kakuzu totally fits in as the offspring of a Cthuloid monster from the realms beyond space and a human. XD It just makes SO MUCH SENSE

Doesn't it seem like he'd do really well in the water? I think so, at least. I think his mask babies would be really fricken' scary in water and out, those suckers could smother things, or grab and hold victims until Kakuzu could come along and take care of things. He'd do well.

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