[Avatar Fic] Black and Gold

[beckyh2112]

Someday I might write about my offline life again. Today is not that day. Reposting my atlaland entry for the last contest.

Title: Black and Gold
Characters: Azula, Mai (one-sided Azula/Mai)
Rating: G
Word Count: 300+ words
Summary: Mai is happy to be back with Zuko. Azula isn't.

Comments

[rosehiptea]

I like that. Very IC and I like the color imagery.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

It only occurred to me until after that it's Saints colors. >_>

[spyridona]

Prettiness. <33 We have to capture a Bex and pay her to write shiiny.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I would love to be paid to write fanfiction, let me tell you.

[robina1984]

I love how you describe the changes in Mai. You captured Azula's crazy girl with the manipulations and all wonderfully. I could totally see this happening in my head as part of an episode. Great work!

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[flowerflute]

Maizula. You must love me.
This is the kind of Azulafic I like to see. Twisted but human, thought neither played too strongly.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

"Neither played too strongly"?

[flowerflute]

They aren't her main feature. A balance. Some people write her as some kind of emotionless guro villain, others make her a perfect wonderful person warped by her father who can easily become 'good'. Both are wrong.