Las Vegas: Ozai & Hakoda, "Just because you can't see the stars doesn't mean they aren't there."beckyh2112July 22 2010, 03:07:21 UTC
The swimming pool was still open at four AM. Hakoda was more shocked that he wasn't surprised by that than by the fact itself. Most of the lights were off, save for a few safety lights lining the path and the lights below the water in the pool itself. The light rising from the city below, though, kept it more than bright enough for a man used to the country.
He expected to be alone up there, but someone floated in the water. Said someone twisted in the water, and he saw it was the Asian from the roulette table. Ozai, the owner of the casino, according to the business card he'd left in Hakoda's pocket
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Re: Las Vegas: Ozai & Hakoda, "Just because you can't see the stars doesn't mean they aren't there."silverhunteressJuly 22 2010, 03:45:13 UTC
Yay! So much better than what I could have done with the same prompt. *grins* So Hakoda did notice what Katara'd been doing, I like his mental assessment of the trip and how the piece isn't in Ozai's point of view. Also they way the prompt was included without actually stating it was nice as it's a fairly awkward sentence.
He expected to be alone up there, but someone floated in the water. Said someone twisted in the water, and he saw it was the Asian from the roulette table. Ozai, the owner of the casino, according to the business card he'd left in Hakoda's pocket ( ... )
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