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Mar 21, 2010 00:46

A cold blue light filled the room, shining from a fist-sized sapphire hanging from the ceiling. Torches along the walls cast weak, flickering shadows. Piandao almost thought the shadows were connected to nothing, but they were too pale to see easily ( Read more... )

character: jeong-jeong, writing, series: avatar, character: piandao, character: iroh, character: bumi, character: pakku

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weirdlet March 21 2010, 15:53:34 UTC
Ooh. I wonder what *they* see when they look at Piandao.

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beckyh2112 March 21 2010, 16:12:41 UTC
That's the twenty million dollar question, isn't it? ^___^

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beboots March 21 2010, 16:33:31 UTC
VERY NICE. I do so love the imagery in this. <3 Bumi was neat - cracks reflecting his cracked mind? I love dragon!Iroh, but I also find it intriguing that there was different imagery for the two firebenders... but it all fits so well! I mean, we know that Iroh met with the masters, but Jeong Jeong always had a much more depreciative "fire consumes all and is evil" kind of mentality in canon.

Again, I like this a lot! (and I'm sad that it's a stand-alone)

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beckyh2112 March 21 2010, 16:48:32 UTC
Thank you! It's not so much a stand-alone as a fragment - if I ever get the rest of this story, I'll definitely try to write it. Too much awesome and creepy imagery to waste.

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arinye March 21 2010, 21:12:58 UTC
Oh my, please do! ~enables shamelessly~ The world needs more well-written awesome creepy.

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flowerflute March 22 2010, 00:55:36 UTC
FFFFFFFFFFFFF-Oh WOW. Is Piandao like a pitted, melting metal golem?

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beckyh2112 March 22 2010, 01:03:41 UTC
Thank you! And no, he isn't. Though the sword is definitely strongly involved with him. ^_^

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flowerflute March 22 2010, 02:27:48 UTC
-wracks brain for what he could BE-

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hedgehog39 March 22 2010, 19:33:04 UTC
Oh dear.
In Soviet Russia, elements bend *you*

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beckyh2112 March 22 2010, 22:24:43 UTC
Thank you!

Not quite. ^__^

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lunatron March 22 2010, 22:55:22 UTC
This is epically metal. They should start a band.

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beckyh2112 March 22 2010, 23:02:54 UTC
*chuckles* They would make an awesome Finnish rock band, wouldn't they?

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lunatron March 23 2010, 00:58:07 UTC
Heck yes!

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