BSG Fic - Reparation, 13/?

[becisvolatile]

Title: Reparation
Author: becisvolatile
Part: 13/?
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Lee/Kara, Bill, Roslin, Helo, Sharon, Cottle, Anders, Dee, Leoben, Racetrack, Seelix.
Word Count: 5300+
Category: Novella
Genre: Romance, Angst, Action with Romance, PWP, Drama
Archiving: The Fallout Shelter, Apollo/Starbuck Fan Fic, Beyond Insane all others please ask

Comments

[boom_queen]

*flailing*

OMG BEC: “I need to pee,” she sounded mildly bored....AND...“The plan sucks.”
Your grasp of Kara's dry sense of humor is freakin perfect. Totally loves you.

The loss of his peers had been a helluva gain for him. Back in the day.
Helo is such a royal badass!

“Eat shit and die, Agathon.”
How can you have me cackling out loud in the middle of an Angst Epic, HOW?

Also? SO much Cottle!love for "Three weeks before her...blowing the frak out of herself."

And then? The gorgeously perfect frakked-up-ness of that last line...GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

You are my queen. All hail bec!

[becisvolatile]

Do you have any idea how much I love to see a review so full of enthusiasm? Makes me all fuzzeh!

Thanks so much. It's instantly gratifying, I'm not ashamed to admit I hang out for comments like this one.

[boom_queen]

Yay! I'm only to happy to provide the warm fuzzehs when you are dishing out the awesome fic :D

I live for good comments too so I totally sympathize!

Amazing!

[lucky63]

Well Bec, you have done it again! I love your fic and you have me checking here at least twice a day for an update. Keep up the amazing work because I can't get enough!

Re: Amazing!

[becisvolatile]

Twice a day? Wow. That is dedication.

Very glad you like it that much!

[kou_shun_u]

helo so kicks ass.it actually did want me to see an AU story running into thiers were he actually is with kara and see how this reality reacts to it.

so clarfication. does tyrol think she is a cylon or no?

“Yeah,” “I can’t remember how many times I tried to tell myself that.”
^_____________^

and so she is super fertile...i dont know what to make of that yet.

and the ending of the chap was cute.

as always cant wait for more.

[becisvolatile]

were he actually is with kara and see how this reality reacts to it.

God that would be fun. I can see the blood, tears, and Raptor-rocking sex now.

Stop giving me ideas.

Tyrol? At first I think he did believe Kara was a Cylon. He certainly had a moment of panic when she disappeared only a hour or so earlier. I think he's still clinging to that, on some level, because if Kara's a Cylon and *shes* being accepted and going to take them to Earth... well, that means there's hope for him.

and so she is super fertile...i dont know what to make of that yet.

Was super fertile. Was. She's now packing some nice implant contraceptives.

[boom_queen]

I can see the blood, tears, and Raptor-rocking sex now.

Ummmm...HELL YEAH.

Pretty plz make some academy/post-academy Helo/Kara pr0n?!? I'm drooling at the mere prospect of such hotness.

OR! Flesh out a prequel ficlet for the time period surrounding when Helo enabled Kara's avoidance of Lee post-funeral. ANGST + SMUT = FTW

*nods head*

[kou_shun_u]

well isnt that the whole point of throwing the seeds? hoping that some would grow?

[ladybugkay]

>>And of course, insane as it was, the plan could only be the product of Lee’s mind. Oh sure, he’d always seemed so quiet and rational, but Kara was well aware that when he was pushed, Lee could be moved to extreme measures and lunacy in the guise of innovation.

I love Kara's sense of humour in this. She's been in such a bad place, but she can always find the morbid humour in any situation.

>>Helo moved around her shoulder and leaned against the wall to her left, removing the lollypop from his mouth to wave it around and punctuate his words. “You want a piggyback? Hera loves them.”

Helo is one of my very favourite characters, and he's so cute here, and when he forces Kara and Lee into impromptu couples therapy. He makes me happy.

And then of course there is the end, and things are finally, kind of, sort of, maybe looking up for Lee. I love this story a lot, and this chapter is still up to par, and I can't wait for the next one.

[becisvolatile]

I love Kara's sense of humour in this. She's been in such a bad place, but she can always find the morbid humour in any situation.

It's almost a defence mechanism. Things are so bad she has to crack a joke to remind everyone (even herself) that it's not getting to her.

And then of course there is the end, and things are finally, kind of, sort of, maybe looking up for Lee.

This makes me happy. It lets me know I've messed with you guys so much... that you'll actually accept Kara biting Lee, and Lee packing his bags as a positive thing. Makes me grin like a spaz.

[williwawz]

Does it make me a bad person if I think that last part where Lee tosses Kara to the bed and (has his wicked way) kisses her against her will is REALLY hot!? Because it was! Now I can't wait to see what Kara's point of view regarding that little incident is!? Hurry up and write the next part (I mean, it was good)!

[becisvolatile]

Does it make me a bad person if...

It makes you a very bad person. *nods* But that's okay. We're all very bad people here.