BSG Fic - Reparation, 7/?

[becisvolatile]

Title: Reparation
Author: becisvolatile
Part: 7/?
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Lee/Kara, Bill, Roslin, Helo, Sharon, Cottle, Anders, Dee, Leoben, Racetrack, Seelix, Tigh.
Word Count: 5400+
Category: Novella
Genre: Romance, Angst, Action with Romance, PWP, Drama
Archiving: The Fallout Shelter, Apollo/Starbuck Fan Fic, Beyond Insane all others please ask

Comments

[wickedgillie]

Gotta love that chatty little Doral and the way his ears stick out.

This was bloody brilliant. And this:

“I could care less about who’s been in your panties, Thrace. Gods know I’ve only got so many years left in me and that’s a list I don’t have the time for.”

had me laughing so hard my toddler came in to see what funny thing mama was looking at so she could laugh, too!

Ah--migraine Dee is a beautiful thing to behold as well. But of course, the best is our clever clever boy finally putting two and two together (and with some mindfrakkage from Leoben to boot!)

Yay!

[becisvolatile]

For me, I remember Doral pretty much on his ears alone, so that was bound to slip in.

Thanks so much for commeting.

[arielmoondance]

Awesome chapter! I love Alpha Lee!

[becisvolatile]

Thanks!

[taxidryer]

Great chapter, hon.

But they’d have to threaten her with bodily harm before she confessed that she was searching the corridors of Galactica for a freaking hug.

“I could care less about who’s been in your panties, Thrace. Gods know I’ve only got so many years left in me and that’s a list I don’t have the time for.”
“I’m asking,” he clarified, “if you’re going to pull that pretty head of yours out of your own sphincter long enough to find Earth, because fact is, this Fleet don’t tolerate useless Cylons.”
Aaaah, thanks for that! The only thing as good as Kara/Leoben interactions is Kara/Tigh. (Of course nothing can beat some Kara/Lee boxing-sexing. I'm talking about platonic interactions, here. Although Kara/Leoben isn't exactly platonic. Forget it...)

And sex with Lee. And Lee’s room. Maybe even Lee, but mostly the sex.
I love that. Even envious ex-wives miss the sex.
He could live to see the end of the colonies, but he would not tolerate just watching Lee and Kara demonstrate time and again just how deeply incapable they were of

[becisvolatile]

Although Kara/Leoben isn't exactly platonic.

No, it isn’t. But it makes for some pretty awesome fire and paint!seks. There’s an antagonism here that I don’t think even Kara/Lee can rival. And in terms of sensible matches, crazy though it sounds, I swear Kara/Leoben makes more sense to me that Kara/Lee.

Thanks for this!

[taxidryer]

I swear Kara/Leoben makes more sense to me that Kara/Lee.
Yup, you said it! Kara/Lee is so complicated, sometimes they seem straight out of real life...

Yay for some Lee/Kara/Leoben!

[angelicus]

Ok, now that I'm back from vacation I'm gonna settle down and read this. I've been dying to since you started posting it. So this is me...telling you I'm reading it. *lol* I'll post some very deep feedback when I'm done. Promise. :D

[becisvolatile]

I'm glad to know you've started. I hope you like it!

part a

[latteaddict]

And there was that whole thing about having torn his soul out of his own chest with a few short words.

He couldn’t forget that. Gods, he was pathetic. He was lower than low. He’d… He’d failed her - again.

Lee beating himself up is hard to read. But if he didn’t love her so much, he wouldn’t be so completely torn apart, so I guess that I love how he’s feeling things so deeply. It’s also showing how he’s accepting Kara as really, truly being human, which is so important. If he still had any doubts, then what happened in the ready room (right back to the day she exploded) wouldn’t be impacting him so much. He wouldn’t feel things so acutely - like his soul being torn from his chest.

Had last night caught up with her? Had one of those men she’d been with revisited her? Lee’s pulse kicked up.

I think I have a serious weakness for protective Lee. I know Kara doesn’t really need protecting, but it turns me to mush when he tries.

Without actually speaking he asked, “Are you okay?”

She stumbled over her own feet to get away from him.I

Re: part a

[becisvolatile]

OMG yay for the multi-part feedback. This is as much fun as the writing itself, I swear.

Lee beating himself up is hard to read.

My biggest concern here was that I hadn’t justified it. I mean… we never see go to these outward displays of angst and responsibility. Not really. Not other than his whole suicidal thing. It took me a lot to think I could reasonably move Lee to murder an unarmed man for Kara. Even if it was a Cylon. I’m not sure I succeeded, but I guess the justification and lee’s mind space on the whole thing comes later.

I think I have a serious weakness for protective Lee.

Unh huh.

During the interlude with Kacey I was hoping Kara would finally get her much needed hug, but I guess Lee hovering close by set Kara too on edge to realise.

You know, the hug is coming. I promise. It’s just… because I suck, I’m going to make her earn it. She has to really, really, need that hug. More than she already does.

Because, did I mention, I suck.

No false flattery between them, but they do respect each other.Right form the mini