Fic: SGA: When The Scales Fall From Our Eyes

[beadattitude]

Title: When The Scales Fall From Our Eyes
Author: Beadattitude
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: For Mature Audiences/NC-17
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, First Time
Betas: gnomi and Julia_here, who were very gracious with a skittish author. tex provided v. encouraging early-days cheerleading. Any remaining mistakes are due to my own oversight and inability to stop poking.

Comments

[danceswithgary]

So beautifully intense - wonderful!

[beadattitude]

Thank you!

[ladyoflisquill]

Wow! You write frantic John in a way that is so compelling. This was wonderful. And I think you were right to finish where you did, any further and I would have exploded.

[beadattitude]

any further and I would have exploded.

Me, too, hon. I'm telling you. This was so...::waves hands::...to write.

[adafrog]

Oh wow, gorgeous.

[beadattitude]

::grins::

holy toledo

[jessebee]

My sweet god, the desperation you got into this. !?! Mostly (break my HEART why don't you) John, but Rodney as well, obviously damaged himself and so selfish and brave to make John face what he wants, what he's doing, to both of them. No wonder you were having a time with this one, this is freakin' intense.

Brava. Brava.

Re: holy toledo

[beadattitude]

::toes ground shyly:: Thank you VERY much, Jess.

I'm still sorta all wrung out, but glad to be done!

[beadattitude]

I love Rodney. I do. When he's right, he's really really right.

Thank you!