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The Arrow's Flight 12/?

Jun 27, 2016 18:06

Title: The Arrow's Flight 12 ( Read more... )

pairing: changmin/junsu, super junior, junho (junsu's brother), yoohwan (yoochun's brother), warning: het, shinee, genre: historical, pairing: jaejoong/oc, pairing: yoochun/yoohwan, completed: arrows flight, pairing: yunho/heechul, pairing: junho/oc, rating: r

Comments 15

shinchul303 June 28 2016, 22:47:55 UTC

Your style is so quiet at the end here, but the emotions are immensely powerful.

Yoochun's confession that he now knows what it feels like to have one's heart torn out, and the understated deadly serious "Don't miss" to Changmin.

I really like and appreciate what you're doing with this story. Exceptional writing!

be_ddelusionall July 6 2016, 17:56:59 UTC

it's a quiet moment. :)

and /blushes/ thank you
hopefully it stays that way!
<3