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be_ddelusionall June 28 2016, 00:08:03 UTC
SMUT FOR harunotenshi!!! My Haru Haru!

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harunotenshi June 28 2016, 00:36:47 UTC

this is more of a cliff hanger than the last two chapters... 😢😢😢

i'm glad that yoohwan will be okay but he'll need lots of rest just like junsu did.

hangeng did betray changmin because of greed. at jaejoong's uncle's orders. so jaejoong and his guards had guessed right.

just who is this lying uncle of his?

i am hoping that seohyun will give birth to a boy.

update again soon! 😄😄😄

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be_ddelusionall July 6 2016, 17:50:42 UTC
It's been so long, I can't remember why I saved you a spot ... lol

Yoohwan will be okay. It's Yoochun who is going to go crazy. He's so overprotective!

Hangeng is a greedy fucker. That is all.

And everyone hopes it's going to be a boy! <3

glad you're enjoying!

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songbird52317 June 28 2016, 00:59:22 UTC
Another wonderful chapter! And so fast. Wasn't it only two days ago you released Chapter 11? So wasn't Yoohwan going to take the second shot at the Festival? I love all the intrigue in this. I'd love to be able to write a complicated puzzle like you have here. I'm assuming you plot it out first before you start writing. Anyway, I just love this story.

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be_ddelusionall July 6 2016, 17:52:58 UTC
Sometimes I have spurts of creativity followed by long weeks of nothing.
And yes, Yoohwan was. But now he is not. Changminc an't miss.

I do not plot it out before I start writing.
My outline for this fic was ---

Outlaw Changmin lets Prince Junsu go bc they are inlove. Junsu plotting with jaejoong to overthrow kings. Kidnap princess. Changmin has to kill the king.

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Yep, that's it. :)
Normally my fics just take on minds of their own. That's why I always mean to write a 2shot and it ends up doing this. ;)
I need to learn to write a fic first and THEN post it. But I'm impatient.

glad you like it! <3

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hamhamheaven June 28 2016, 02:23:10 UTC
Chunnie isn't the only one crying. I really hope Siwon made it to Yoohwan in time to prevent any infections, because if he...nope, not gonna even type that. *shakes head*

I find it interesting that Chul is secretly so against the Park brothers' relationship. No matter what our personal vice, there's always something that makes us look at other people and go "At least I don't to that."

And now we wait and see if Max can get word to Jaejoongie about his uncle before the baby shows up. *has run out of fingernails, and so begins tugging on her hair*

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be_ddelusionall July 6 2016, 17:55:32 UTC
Don't worry. I'd never kill off one of the park brothers. They are my favorites, after all :)

and LOL there are so many things that I wish I could say "at least I don't do that" to. :)

don't pull out your hair!

<3

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songbird52317 June 29 2016, 07:03:55 UTC
I'm pretty sure Hangeng is dead. Yoochun put an arrow in his face.

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be_ddelusionall July 6 2016, 17:56:15 UTC
Yes, indeed.
Yoochun put an arrow through his face.

but yes. They are safe. They'll be okay. Just have to recover.

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jasexists June 28 2016, 14:45:43 UTC
Oh my god this is getting really exciting.

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be_ddelusionall July 6 2016, 17:56:35 UTC
lol you say that so often that it's lost all meaning :)

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jasexists July 6 2016, 18:04:02 UTC
Haha sorry I'm not very good at articulating what I feel ^^
I really enjoy your stories!

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be_ddelusionall July 6 2016, 18:24:15 UTC
lol tis okay! This fic is all sorts of just ACTION all over the place. It's strange because I did not realize how often I use SMUT to slow the story down until I wrote this. There isn't really smut in this story.

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