Pick Me Up - 4/5

[be_ddelusionall]

Title: Pick Me Up 4/5
Rating: R
Paring: Jaejoong/Yoochun
Disclaimer: If they were mine ... ... sorry, lost my train of thought. Imagining what I would do if they were mine. On to the story!
Word Count: 3958

Comments

[juhli]

Oh yeah, Yoochun came back!!!!

Kind of relieved that they didn't have wild sex yet...makes their relationship kind of more valuable (?)...i especially like the last part <3

Donghae is cool!

[be_ddelusionall]

Yep, he came back.

and nope, no wild sex (fic is only rated R *giggles*) but yeah, I was going to but it didn't feel right. If I was Yoochun, i know I wouldn't be ablt to right away. I'm glad you like it!~

[cloudedmirror]

Man evil Yunho and evil Junsu. >_< It's hard for me to read them all sinister like that.

But still, I'm very much enjoying this fic. I can't believe it will be over in just one more chapter! Seems like it could go on for some more.

Jae is so sweet. <3

[be_ddelusionall]

Sorry sorry. For the purposes of this story, they had to be bad.

I'm glad you're still enjoying it, and I may or may not do something else in this universe just because I like the characters so much, but we'll see.

jae rocks!

[cloudedmirror]

Oh no, I know you had to do it for the story. And you did it well. But I just dont like thinking of them like that. haha.

But omg you should!! You've turned me into a Jaechun fan. lol. I totally wanna see more of this particular Jae. Is Changmin gonna appear?

[be_ddelusionall]

lol, as soon as I think of a plot for another story, I'll write it.

and changmin? what makes you think Changmin is in this story? *whistles innocently*

[twiglet71]

Again a great chapter. I think this fic is too short - even with an epi. Perhaps you could write a sequel expanding on the characters and adding more. Whoops!.....listen to me getting bossy! I just don't want this to end yet as it is really good xxx

[be_ddelusionall]

LOL! Be bossy! Just shows how much you love it! And trust me, as soon as I think of a sequel, it will be written, but I need a plot.

I do believe that with the last part, you will be happy.

[be_ddelusionall]

I'm glad you like it. and I really hope you like the last part. I'll probably post it tonight when I get home from work!

[be_ddelusionall]

Soulmates rock! Yep, relationship building is the key to everything.

Thanks for reading!