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Fate Meets Destiny: Chapter Seventeen

Apr 20, 2008 23:12

Title: Fate Meets Destiny
Author: bbmgirlfan
Pairing: Ennis/Jack (AU/AU)
Rating: R?
Disclaimer: just playing with the boys, they don't belong to me

Summary: Jack and Ennis grew up together and even went to the same college before moving back home to take over each family's business. They became roommates but that's all they were! Or, is it?

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chapter seventeen, fate meets destiny, au/au, jack/ennis, bbmgirlfan

Comments 64

sienata January 10 2009, 06:22:55 UTC

well alrighty then! that was exciting! i'm glad they are finally moving in the right direction. i support all their future lovemaking plans and hope to read about them in vivid technicolor detail! thanks for writing this sweet and sexy story. hugs. s.

bbmgirlfan January 10 2009, 06:30:50 UTC

"Sweet and sexy" ... I like the sound of that!

Thanks, Sienna! :)

lv2walk January 10 2009, 20:36:28 UTC

well alright then! that was exciting!

lol. That was funny, siena. You cracked me up.

This was great. I loved that last scene while Jack was trying to make coffee.

meooowww January 11 2009, 01:50:30 UTC

That cracked me up too!!!

And Sienna's comment is my sentiments exactly.

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freetraveller15 January 10 2009, 06:31:00 UTC

That was sweet & hot in equal measure; lovely chapter :)
Thank you so much for sharing, hugs,
Paola

bbmgirlfan January 10 2009, 06:48:48 UTC

Awww, thanks, Paola!

(((hugs)))

Jeanine

ifyoucantfixit2 January 10 2009, 07:30:54 UTC

Well it looks like Ennis is a fast decision maker. He was
right on the track after only a few days. WOW!!! That was
lucious. He sure gave Jack what he has been fantazing over.
lol janice

bbmgirlfan January 10 2009, 15:43:00 UTC

Well, I don't know that he's made any serious decisions. But he did react to a very powerful stimulus! :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Jeanine

mrs_spamlad January 10 2009, 07:48:01 UTC

Very nice! They are getting closer and closer....
And hot in a loving kind of way. As I read, it's like I can feel what's been building between them their whole lives.
I can't wait for them to REALLY get together!
Thank you!
Jill

bbmgirlfan January 10 2009, 15:47:12 UTC

And hot in a loving kind of way. As I read, it's like I can feel what's been building between them their whole lives.

Wow! That compliment is so wonderful it feels like getting an award. Thanks so much!!

Jeanine

bentgyro January 10 2009, 08:05:42 UTC

Well, Jack has Ennis' atttention, now. Can't wait until they really "get it on"!
Thanks!
HT

bbmgirlfan January 10 2009, 15:57:18 UTC

Hi, HT!

He sure does. I'd say he has had his attention all along (hence the hiding out at work), but shirtless!Jack proved to be an irresistible temptation.

Jeanine