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bb4eva

Filius Romanus

Sep 24, 2009 22:32

Title: Filius Romanus (Son of Rome)
Authors:
bb4eva and chamilet
Summary: An au!au set in the Roman Republic circa 50BC. A centurion in Caesar's army meets his match.
Acknowledgments: We were each others betas, so let us know if we screwed up:) Many thanks to

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bb4eva September 25 2009, 06:26:39 UTC

Arrghhh - I have spent an hour fighting with the LJ cut. I apologize for messing with the format of your friends page - still trying to fix it.

chamilet September 25 2009, 15:17:03 UTC

I'm sorry. I think I jinxed you talking about all of MY problems with the LJ-cut:(

torry28 September 25 2009, 07:53:58 UTC

I just love this story, Its very interesting to know that the commander who has taking Yannis in is probably Jacobus's father. And I have a feeling that is the reason the old Titus is so hateful to Jacobus, he probably knows or suspects. Like you say they have spies every where, someone sleeping with someone else wife would not be a secret for long. It is interesting that the commander also figured Yannis out and that he is hard on Jacobus not only to make him stronger and ready for battle but also because he has fallen in love with him and he is fighting his own demons so to speak. I think as much as Jacobus resents the treatment and humiliating he has to endure, there is also great respect for Yannis and I would think love is blossoming on both sides. As the commander said may the Gods protect them all. I have read a great deal of Roman history and the series of I Claudius on BBC comes to mind it was so marvelous to really learn more about the Roman Emperors. But that was many years ago ( ... )

chamilet September 27 2009, 04:13:53 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hope we won't disappoint or screw with history too badly.

cornflake2912 September 25 2009, 08:16:40 UTC

Very interesting! Thank you!

chamilet September 27 2009, 04:14:11 UTC

Thank you for commenting:)

tizi17 September 25 2009, 08:27:41 UTC

thank you!!

chamilet September 27 2009, 04:14:25 UTC

Thank you:)

sweetje September 25 2009, 10:08:47 UTC

I must say I'm enjoying this twist *no pun intended* in the story. The possibility of Jacobus being the Commander's son is intriguing, and the fact that Yannis's secret feelings for Jacobus are no secret to the Commander, who is so accepting of him, shows that the true relationship between them is a close one.
I do love reading this story. In fact, I'm so hooked, I can hardly wait for your next chapter to be posted. : )
Debra

chamilet September 27 2009, 04:15:43 UTC

So glad you're enjoying it:) Hopefully we'll have the next chapter up soon:)