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bb4eva

Passion of a Saint

Jul 20, 2009 08:48

Title: Passion of A Saint
Genre: AU/AU Ennis/Jack
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: The Characters of Ennis And Jack belong to the inimitable Ann Proulx. I am simply borrowing them for this story. No financial benefit is derived from this story.
Summary: This story is set at St. Augustine's. A pious Ennis is a Deacon hoping to become a priest.Warnings: This is ( Read more... )

ennis, bb4eva, brokeback mountain. passion of a saint, jack

Comments 57

apreg July 20 2009, 16:37:25 UTC

Wow! I love this story, poor Ennis keeps on telling himself that he's not going sleep with Jack again, but he does anyway. hope you had a good weekend, can't wait for more. hugs. Ashley.

bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:15:08 UTC

Hi Ashley!
You seem to have first comment down as your territory! I had a great weekend - and the week is starting out quite well too!

It wasn't actually my intention to create such a back and forth dynamic - it just keeps happening - and all my attempts to talk some sense into my version of Ennis isn't working. He'll come around eventually I guess, lol.
hugs
AN

aileenfan July 20 2009, 16:42:48 UTC

Well, Father Michael has a secret. I wonder if he lets Ennis into it
some day???

Jack sure is persistant, but that's just our Jack being himself;)

Amazing love scene!!!

bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:16:56 UTC

Jack keeps surprising me too. Seriously I am no longer sure If I am writing them or they are directing me - lol

Father Michael's secret will all come out in good time and yeah hopefully it will help.

xoxoxo
AN

taranryan_13 July 20 2009, 16:47:39 UTC

Good luck Father Michael. You have your work cut out for you with Ennis. I'm glad that Ennis has someone he can trust with what is happening between him and Jack. As for Jack he knows that he has to wait for Ennis to get past his fears and listen to his heart so he can find happiness.

Neyla

bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:18:22 UTC

Hello Neyla!

You are right Father Michael needs all the help he can get. lol - and Jack too I suppose. Ennis will have a lot to make up for in the future I suppose.

bentgyro July 20 2009, 18:23:59 UTC

Jack is just plain irresistable to Ennis - when will he realize this and work with him. Good to Jack for being so in Ennis' face!
Thank you!
HT

bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:20:00 UTC

Ennis is too stubborn for his own good! I suppose it's great that Jack is understanding, giving him time to figure it all out.
U're welcome!

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bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:22:18 UTC

Wow - I got a surprise through all your active imaginations - cool! *does happy dance*

It was a concern of mine that the story line was far too predictable. :-)

grlewis July 22 2009, 05:30:20 UTC

hoosier67, you've said what i was thinking. will father michael resume his mentoring roll with ennis? what secret does father michael hold in his past. what alternative could he suggest to ennis rather than becoming a priest. does jack really want to become a priest too, or is he just trying to force ennis' hand and make ennis admit his love for him. and then when it comes right down to it, ennis will really have to choose whether he loves jack more than he loves god. or maybe just as much. it will be hard for ennis, either way. i'm still anxious to see how you swing this story. gr