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bb4eva

Passion of a Saint

Jul 20, 2009 08:48

Title: Passion of A Saint
Genre: AU/AU Ennis/Jack
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: The Characters of Ennis And Jack belong to the inimitable Ann Proulx. I am simply borrowing them for this story. No financial benefit is derived from this story.
Summary: This story is set at St. Augustine's. A pious Ennis is a Deacon hoping to become a priest.Warnings: This is ( Read more... )

ennis, bb4eva, brokeback mountain. passion of a saint, jack

Comments 57

jacks_key July 20 2009, 18:39:21 UTC

Father Michael has a secret of his own. I hope he will share his story with Ennis, and that will help Ennis choose the right path (meaning: Jack, of course). :)

bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:23:15 UTC

I think he'll share eventually. He is old enough - and smart enough to know that timing is everything. :-)

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bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:25:20 UTC

Hello Jen,

HA!
So glad to see more surprised faces - And yes the manips are lovely. Very humbling to get that kind of attention (loving every minute of it of course).

xoxoxo
AN

chamilet July 20 2009, 20:16:44 UTC

I like the changes you made:)

bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:27:45 UTC

I am so glad you approve! Read over it real slow to make sure I didn't insert any typos - lol - you really did inspire all the smoother landing of prose. I think you literally caught every rough point that grated me on the rough draft and pointed out exactly why it wasn't working!

I can't say thanks enough!

chamilet July 21 2009, 05:53:52 UTC

I'm just glad I can help:)

tommyknocker July 20 2009, 20:32:22 UTC

Mmm. I'm anxious to find out Fr. Michael's story.

I personally have enjoyed all the nods to canon. I like seeing how those situations fit in to other situations or scenarios. =)

I can't believe Jack just showed up like that. Crazy! Haha. Boy is determined, though. Gotta love that.

Thank you!

Jennifer

bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:30:40 UTC

I think Father Michael has sorta woven himself into the story. His secrets will be uncovered soon enough.

The canon is such a beautiful story and made such an impression on me that I couldn't actually think up a story without the backdrop of the OS. I am glad you approve.

xoxoxoxo
AN

Passion of a Saint argentine65 July 20 2009, 21:45:06 UTC

Amazing Jack, so brave and willing to fight for his man, who can not resist him. I am glad Ennis has Father Michael to hear him and perhaps to make him understand that love is a force of nature and that God is love. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha

Re: Passion of a Saint bb4eva July 21 2009, 04:33:54 UTC

Hi Martha!

U're welcome. I think because Ennis' dilemma is religious it would most impossible to resolve without other voices in his head besides his and Jack's: Enter the two priests. Both of whom in different was have sorta helped Ennis grow and evolve - even though he's doing so slowly.

xoxoxo
AN