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bb4eva

Passion of a Saint

Jul 18, 2009 12:21

Title: Passion of A Saint
Genre: AU/AU Ennis/Jack
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: The Characters of Ennis And Jack belong to the inimitable Ann Proulx. I am simply borrowing them for this story. No financial benefit is derived from this story.
Summary: This story is set at St. Augustine's. A pious Ennis is a Deacon hoping to become a priest, and Jack is ( Read more... )

au/au, passion of a saint, brokeback mountain

Comments 45

apreg July 18 2009, 20:19:06 UTC

Great chapter and great story, I wish that I was able to write like this. Hope you have a good weekend. hugs. Ashley.

bb4eva July 18 2009, 20:51:05 UTC

Thanks Ashley!

I am so glad you like it.
*does happy dance at the compliment*

AN

carmenmariabs July 18 2009, 20:29:36 UTC

Yes, there would be a next time, and another and another ... the problem is, if this life were pleased if, in the long run, this increase more than love, it decreases.
Jack can have patience, but ..¿¿¿???

bb4eva July 18 2009, 20:49:44 UTC

Trust me Jack has a naughty plan up his sleeves ;-) He isn't planning on being very patient :-)

aileenfan July 18 2009, 21:27:45 UTC

"
In that moment Ennis finally realized that Jack didn’t have a piece of his heart, he had all of it; and there was no power divine enough to undo that bond."

Yes, and...??? Ennis??? What are you going to to with this revelation??? *fingers tapping* ;)))

Cute sex scene, they fit together so perfectly and I don't mean just physically;)

Oh, I completely forgot about Alma!!! Is she going to cause troubles or will she keep what she definitely saw (at least, I think she saw), to herself??? Hmmm:)

bb4eva July 19 2009, 21:52:26 UTC

Well you kinda have to be patient, he'll figure it out eventually. :-)

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bb4eva July 19 2009, 21:55:33 UTC

I completely agree. I am no longer a practicing catholic, but if the ideal of Christ is to be lived then the greatest commanded was to love one another as you would yourself...in essence that radical Idea at the time is supposed to be the heart of Christianity although you would never know by listening to those you claim to be christian.

I am glad you like the story Jen!
AN

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bb4eva July 19 2009, 21:57:00 UTC

My only words of consolation is that the satisfaction of overcoming an obstacle is directly proportional to the size of the hurdle itself. :-)