[FMA Fic] 1:10 to Central (2/3)

Mar 29, 2013 11:08

Title: 1:10 to Central
Author: bay115
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,252 this chapter
Characters: Ed, Al, Winry, Ling and his bodyguards, Isaac McDougal, ensemble
Warnings: AU/alternative timeline, some violence
Summary: Ed, Al, Winry, Ling and his bodyguards go back to Central after Hughes's death. Something goes wrong in Central that separates the ( Read more... )

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seta_suzume March 30 2013, 01:46:00 UTC
Winry knocked him out with her wrench! XD

I'll be looking forward to part three!

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bay115 March 30 2013, 01:56:55 UTC
Haha yup!

Hey, sorry to ask a favor, you think you can copy/paste your reply to Part One in this post? For some reason LJ posted Part One three times as I was editing from DW. Here was what you replied saved for your mention on Envy's description since I took care of that:

Being giving some information by Envy and Lust is a great reason for McDougal to know the things he appears to know. I am really impressed with how you used McDougal in this fic. I think you fit him into a better place in the canon than the makers of Brotherhood did. ^^; It's an interesting AU scenario.

“It’s my pleasure. I wouldn’t be a gentleman if I hadn’t answered your questions. Good luck finding the Freezing Alchemist because you’re going to need it.” <- I laughed.

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