mr. endlessly - donghae/kyuhyun, pg-13

May 06, 2010 21:16

mr. endlessly
paralyzing_time
romance, angst; pg-13; kyuhae
2843 words
this heart. it will beat for you until it dies. (how long are you willing to wait? a life time.) au

i'd pull down the moon for you. )

pairing: donghae/kyuhyun, fandom: super junior, story: oneshot

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prpldrkrse May 7 2010, 04:36:25 UTC
spot?

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prpldrkrse May 7 2010, 04:51:14 UTC
): this is sad, and it's great. i love this.

i love how donghae loves kyuhyun, and that he tries to use jessica as his getaway

my fav part:
“sometimes i get mad about you breaking your promise,” donghae starts in a tone of defeat, “and then i remember that you didn’t really have your own heart.” ):

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paralyzing_time May 7 2010, 19:53:07 UTC
thank you for reading and commenting ^^

jessica, jessica is always my female scapegoat >>;

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yuefeng May 7 2010, 04:40:22 UTC
I loved this. And I'm too busy fawning over it to say much coherent. But jgydisutditxhvjgjykhk. <3~

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paralyzing_time May 7 2010, 20:02:01 UTC
aksjdlasd;;; thank you so much for these compliments ♥

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lovesickelectrc May 7 2010, 05:01:33 UTC
Oh my god crying.

This actually made me teary. I loved it, the simplicity, Kyuhyun, Donghae, the Kyuhae, sdlhgsdklhf idek but this is so lovely. <3

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paralyzing_time May 7 2010, 19:59:50 UTC
adkjsalda i'm so sorry. sweetie! ;__; *wipes your tears*

thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥

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elliebear128 May 7 2010, 05:24:30 UTC
I really like the dynamic between Kyuhyun with a sick heart and Donghae wanting to become a docter to be able to fix it, even if life eventually gets in their way.

the truth is, hyung, i really did wish we lasted forever.
*left a little broken-hearted*

Have you checked out the Color_Stained SuJu contest, I think you'd do an amazing job.

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paralyzing_time May 7 2010, 19:58:19 UTC
life always gets in the way, sighhh

i'm so flattered that you commented on this! i love/adore your kyuhae stories

to be honest, i actually did look around at the comm, but i don't have time for it right now; i'm still contemplating whether or not to join

thank you for reading and commenting!

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elliebear128 May 9 2010, 05:56:18 UTC
;D

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sirhin May 7 2010, 06:04:13 UTC
This was utterly depressing but I loved every minute of it. >_< I'm actually taking a break I really shouldn't take from writing my Final paper, but so be it - however, I'll make this quick. ^^

I love Donghae plans to be a cardiologist for Kyuhyun (because we know it can't be because of anything else). As for Kyuhyun and his faulty heart - it fit this story perfectly! It was beautiful!

you told me that you weren’t forever, and that nothing ever lasts forever.

but, donghae, you lasted a lifetime. that’s long enough for me.

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paralyzing_time May 7 2010, 19:56:57 UTC
i'd be a cardiologist for any of them ;___; want to heal their broken hearts

you shouldn't be taking a break! D: go, go write your final paper because this fic will still be here tomorrow! hwaiting~

though, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment ^^

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sirhin May 8 2010, 15:05:56 UTC
haha... I'm a master of procrastinating! ^^ I do fine - I started and finished my 22-paged end-of-term paper last semester the day it was due and I still got an A in the class. I thought I was a goner, haha. But thanks for reminding me! I blame it on senioritis. ^^

I reread your fic, again. lol... ♥

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paralyzing_time May 9 2010, 01:37:14 UTC
i'm always lazy, no matter what time of the year it is xD 22 pages is insane; i've never written more than five!

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