:Dream A Little, Dream Of Me

Sep 05, 2011 10:55

Title:Dream A Little, Dream Of Me
Author:bakudanhatsugen
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dream of me, dream a little

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puucho September 5 2011, 09:45:49 UTC
AHHHAAAHAH.... IS HE DYING??????? ...

K.. MUST WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER... *nod nod*

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bakudanhatsugen September 5 2011, 15:33:23 UTC
I'm glad that you like it and yes I'm already writing the next chapter

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bakudanhatsugen September 5 2011, 15:36:43 UTC
Yeah me two but I thought that will spice a little bit the content. I'm glad that you liked it and yes, if you want to know more then you'll have to wait till next chapter ^^ Actually it wasn't meant to be like this but this is how it turned out to be.^^

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araragi September 6 2011, 13:35:57 UTC
A new chapter ( ... )

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bakudanhatsugen September 6 2011, 17:34:36 UTC
I'm glad that you commented at my story and I'm very happy to read your comment cause know I know what I've done wrong and I'll make it better this time, no hurry.

I know that Reita and Ruki just meet and he couldn't feel that powerful love. I will make the understanding in the next chapter. I wanted this to happen like a misunderstanding. I'm sorry that I forced a little the end because Reita knew that he really hurt ed Ruki and the boy is hurt. Ruki had the chance to learn how to trust a person but that trust had been broken. What Reita felt at the end of the story I'll explain in the next chapter with no forced action. This time I'll explain everything.

I'm glad that you told me what Ive done wrong cause now I can make it better. Really thank you.

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araragi September 6 2011, 18:33:28 UTC
That's alright.

I can understand why Ruki reacted the way he did, I think he was the one who got hurt the most here. Just like you said, someone he trusted turned out to be a liar.
In my opinion it were Reita's thoughts and doings which were maybe too rushed.

Anyway, I will be looking for a next chapter!
There's no need to thank me, I'm happy if you find my comment helpful ( ´ U ´ )

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bakudanhatsugen September 7 2011, 09:38:46 UTC
I really did find it helpful. Your comment made me realize what I've done wrong so I won't have to repeat it again.

I'm glad that you really liked my story ^^ you guys are the best ^^thank you for your sweet and helpful comment ^^

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bakudanhatsugen September 7 2011, 09:40:57 UTC
ma bucur k iti place si tr sa recunosc k am facut o greseala pt k m-am grabit dar acest capitol trebuia sa fie bazat pe neintelegere. Voi explica sentimentele grabite ale lui Reita in capitolul urmator. Ma bucur k iti place ^^

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