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krazykitten46 February 7 2008, 14:05:46 UTC
I loved seeing Viggo manhandle Johnny putting him in his place. Of course the image of Viggo in a kilt was thrilling. An insightful chapter, that Cillian may be beautiful but not helpless. There is fire in those sweet eyes. I do hope Sean can handle him.

So what do they face now? No rest for the weary.

bon

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emerywhat February 7 2008, 14:40:51 UTC
Major Depp seems to have dangerously underestimated the strength of feeling growing between Orlando and Viggo, but the way you have been writing his character I feel confident he will show his worth to both of them before the story is out.

Another completely engaging chapter, despite your evil ending point. snark!

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Pearls before swine argentine65 February 7 2008, 14:42:33 UTC
Bailey: very sneaky Johnny "A prudent course would be to pretend acceptance for now and to observe this Viggo for a clear sign that he was unsuitable" and jealous also. I just loved Viggo and his attitude. Thank you as usual. Martha

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samtyr February 7 2008, 15:07:52 UTC
I can't help but feel sorry for Johnny you know, even though I tend to accept V/O as a OTP. And really, the 'Pirates' films would have been a whole lot more *ahem* interesting if they had included some scenes like the one you wrote above. But that's Disney for ya; can't be freaking out the kiddies and their parents who spend all those $$$$. Too bad -- their loss, our gain. Looking forward to reading more soon. :)

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weepingnaiad February 7 2008, 16:32:07 UTC
Oh, my. Johnny really has it bad and I fear he's going to do something overly foolish, especially now that Viggo has made plain his intentions. I really enjoyed that scene, BTW. I could just see the intensity radiating off of each of them.

I'm so glad Cillian chose Sean over the tavern. They seem wonderful together!

Evil cliffhanger ending, though.

Impatiently awaiting more!

*hugs*
WN

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