Transformation vs. Dreamwalkers

[bagelwhore]

So we don't have to have a poem for class tomorrow, but Sean gave me a topic and I tried to write a poem about it
The topic is the title of the poem
So you can see what the randomness did for the poem itself, heh ^-^

Cyborg Zombies

Some guy just took a huge chunk out of this girls’s arm
She snapped back with jagged teeth and tore off his face
I just walk

Comments

[vive028]

Who is the narrator and why arent the zombies attacking him? is he human... or something else?

hmmm... his lack of feeling is very interesting. i'm not sure what to make out of it.

But it literally tickles me pink that you decide to write a poem simply because you wanted to, and not because you were assigned to. my friend is slowly becoming a poet!!! hehehe

[bagelwhore]

XD
you should give me subjects to write about from time to time
just to flex my poem muscles and see if i can do it
and i trust your subjects
they can be serious or completely random
like robotic zombies for instance ^0^

[blackxangel]

Love it. And I love your approach towards poetry. I've been analyzing buckets of it this semester.

You need to get a yellow card for not hanging out with me considering the only thing between us is a park. =(

[bagelwhore]

^-^
Thanks, you make me smile like whoa!

And I sorry, but you haven't come to see ME either
so :P on you

[blackxangel]

Honeybunny, just tell me when and where and I'll rush to you with wide open arms.