Re: Breaking Point (Part 9)(Writer-Non)
anonymous
August 27 2012, 05:21:25 UTC
I'm trying my best,I've been scribbling down ideas when I can. Works gotten the best of me but I'm definitely doing to finish this! Thank you for the support :3.
Breaking Point (Part 10)
anonymous
August 27 2012, 05:55:12 UTC
(Sorry about the long hiatus,it takes awhile to try to get some good ideas. As usual,please be warned this does have disturbing themes including: rape,murder,death and angst. Please use your discretion.)
The acrid smell of hospital grade disinfectant would hit Dojima's nose like a fist. Slowly he opened his eyes,they felt like they had been glued together,sticky..hard like they had been closed for a long time even though it seemed like minutes to him.
He took in a sharp breath as the bright lights would hit his eyes,his pupils shrinking at the bright lights. His head had a perpetual and dull ringing that started at the base of his skull and echoed its way forwards.His thoughts jumbled as the contents of the wreckage he had left behind.
Where,where am I?A nurse would quietly wander into the room,distracted she didn't seem to notice that he was awake yet.Fiddling with his IV drip,Dojima must have made a noise because she looked over with a start
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Breaking Point (Part 12)
anonymous
December 4 2012, 03:09:50 UTC
(I haven't forgotten about this story,just needed some more inspiration. Writer's block is terrible. Anyways,please be aware this contains Dark themes. Reader discretion is advised
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Breaking Point (Part 13)
anonymous
December 11 2013, 04:20:13 UTC
(Yes,I still am working on this story. I really do apologize for the hiatus and inconsistency with my posts.But I do hope whoever still is following,or is reading this finds it interesting.)
(Please be advised,this fiction has a dark theme to it including scenes of death,murder,rape,and various other things which may be considered unpleasant. Thank you.)
The third time seemed to be the charm,if you used that particular phrase. The last,thin crack that had been etched into Adachi throughout the years,perhaps it had been the turning point,the breaking point that had made him into the monster he was now. The one that protected,and yet,abused the vulnerable young man that he had pushed inside,hidden away from everyone else.
The third time,hadn't been an accident at all. The third time,as he felt himself being shoved against the office wall,being penetrated over and over again,ripped from the inside out,it had been retaliation.
Why can't they just leave me alone? Why can't they just stop it? Why?Why?Why!?The question he had hated so
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The acrid smell of hospital grade disinfectant would hit Dojima's nose like a fist. Slowly he opened his eyes,they felt like they had been glued together,sticky..hard like they had been closed for a long time even though it seemed like minutes to him.
He took in a sharp breath as the bright lights would hit his eyes,his pupils shrinking at the bright lights. His head had a perpetual and dull ringing that started at the base of his skull and echoed its way forwards.His thoughts jumbled as the contents of the wreckage he had left behind.
Where,where am I?A nurse would quietly wander into the room,distracted she didn't seem to notice that he was awake yet.Fiddling with his IV drip,Dojima must have made a noise because she looked over with a start ( ... )
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(Please be advised,this fiction has a dark theme to it including scenes of death,murder,rape,and various other things which may be considered unpleasant. Thank you.)
The third time seemed to be the charm,if you used that particular phrase. The last,thin crack that had been etched into Adachi throughout the years,perhaps it had been the turning point,the breaking point that had made him into the monster he was now. The one that protected,and yet,abused the vulnerable young man that he had pushed inside,hidden away from everyone else.
The third time,hadn't been an accident at all. The third time,as he felt himself being shoved against the office wall,being penetrated over and over again,ripped from the inside out,it had been retaliation.
Why can't they just leave me alone?
Why can't they just stop it?
Why?Why?Why!?The question he had hated so ( ... )
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