Soar like an Eagle, Flutter like a Dove

[carey_pontmercy]

This is possibly the worst poem that I have ever read. Enjoy! My comments are in bold.

my heart will always be forever yours
just a poem i thought of. nelleis feelings towards sweeney, n a sort of life story thing. preatty sad.

"Preatty" sad, indeed.

Comments

[carey_pontmercy]

I assume that the author meant "Nellie's", as in Nellie Lovett.

[supercrook]

Nelleis sounds like it should be Hollis Mason/Nelson Gardner slash.

[ladysylvan]

YES.

[tokiohotelsucks]

"Then she died, was gone alive no more"

I don't know why that made me laugh so much.

[leroaminggnome]

You and me both.

[dioschorium]

Cripes. I had no idea that the poem was this awful.

Does "preatty" rhyme with "Beatty"?

[mrs_newsman]