Soar like an Eagle, Flutter like a Dove
This is possibly the worst poem that I have ever read. Enjoy! My comments are in bold.
my heart will always be forever yours
just a poem i thought of. nelleis feelings towards sweeney, n a sort of life story thing. preatty sad.
"Preatty" sad, indeed.
She [Lucy] was as beautiful like mighty Aphrodite herself
So, Lucy was as beautiful as an obscure Woody Allen movie? That's kind of confusing, author.
Then she died, was gone alive no more
-had shuffled off this mortal coil, run down the curtain, joined the choir invisible, WAS AN EX-LUCY!
The nights I cried over you, pearly tears falling for you
Mary Sue tears are the worst. My sympathies, Mrs. Lovett.
Then you came and my spirit soared like an eagle
-over a Native American crying tears of Coca-Cola while a stay-at-home mom baked apple pies for rosy-cheeked children behind a white-picket fence during a barbeque taking place under a flag IN AMERICA, no doubt.