Comments | badfic_quotes: After much deliberation...

eerisedda in badfic_quotes

After much deliberation...

Aug 02, 2010 18:47

I finally decided that I was just going to spork this GaaLee fic, because it seriously needs to be done and because I am procrastinating on packing for my big, cross-country move (time for another good idea, bad idea!) Admittedly, it is not the worst fic out there. It really has potential, if only the author would learn to use proper grammar, stop ( Read more... )

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damnedangelcry August 3 2010, 04:36:00 UTC

"...and his hair fell beneath his head like a short black waterfall of silk."

and my first thought was:
Oh God. He has hair loss?!

Gaara's hair is bleeding. It's sweating blood, in fact.
HAHAHAHAHA. Bleeding hair is EPIC mental image!

eerisedda August 3 2010, 04:37:44 UTC

haha. Oh man. That's great. Lee would be so sad to lose his hair! >_<

ran_mouri82 August 6 2010, 00:08:14 UTC

"Lee drove his tongue back between Gaara’s lips and began to trace every inch of his gums, teeth, tongue, and throat."

WHAT?!?! His throat? When did Lee become Orochimaru??!?! And does Gaara not have a gag reflex? Just. No.

WIN for you. FAIL for badfic. If it's any consolation, I got a gag reflex reading it.

eerisedda August 6 2010, 04:15:00 UTC

haha. Well, it's good to know most of us don't have weird throat fetishes. ^^