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and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*

Oct 08, 2010 13:53

Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )

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win/win [4/?] anonymous January 20 2011, 12:39:44 UTC

A/n MOAR PORN and maybe they'll get to the actual fucking someday, who knows?! JFC OP I hope you're cool with more PWP. I'm not sure I know how to write anything else anymore D:ooo ( ... )

win/win [9/?] anonymous February 17 2011, 19:51:46 UTC

“But it wasn’t alright. Not by a long shot. I… Um, this is kinda embarrassing but whatever; I started thinking about you when I was in bed at night and, you know…” Yosuke paused, cleared his throat. “And in the end I just couldn’t deny it any longer. I finally admitted to myself I was into you and girls just weren’t my thing. Got it?” He pulled Souji closer, not breaking eye contact for a second, the look in them more serious than Souji had seen for a long, long time. “I don’t like girls. I like you. Got itSouji swallowed hard before nodding as much as Yosuke’s tight grip allowed him. “Got it,” he croaked. The warm feeling in his chest spread through his body, making his cheeks heat up and his hands tingle. He tried a smile. “That was quite the speech, Yosuke. Didn’t know you had it in you ( ... )

win/win [10/?] anonymous February 17 2011, 19:56:41 UTC

While Yosuke tugged and kicked and swore, the sound of a seam tearing making Souji cringe, Souji followed the gasped directions and retrieved the bag, which he emptied by simply turning it upside down, letting the contents fall to the floor with a clatter, way past being neat by then ( ... )

win/win [11/?] anonymous February 17 2011, 20:01:18 UTC

“Listen,” Souji said quietly, leaning in until his forehead bumped softly against Yosuke’s. “If we are going too fast, if you want to wait… I completely understand if you do. We can break this off at any time ( ... )

win/win [12/?] anonymous February 17 2011, 20:05:23 UTC

Souji slid off Yosuke’s fingers with a slick noise that drew something like a whimper from him. “Coat your cock.”

Yosuke scrambled to obey, hastily wiping his messy fingers off on his thigh before grabbing the lube, fighting to snap the cap open with still slippery fingers and then squeezing out a big blob, far too much, on his cock, swearing at the mess and wiping at it until Souji swiped the bottle from him and threw it on the floor and slapped away his hand from his groin.

“Doesn’t matter.” With a quick move Souji gathered some of the gel and ran his hand up and down the shaft before he grabbed the base, shuffled forwards and sank down.

He didn’t bother pausing until the head had breached him and he had to stop, hissing between his teeth and squeezing his eyes shut, the sudden stretch sending a pang of pain straight up his spine. So he’d failed rather spectacularly to go slow after all. Oh well, he figured, just as long as he held perfectly still for a moment things would be fine. Yosuke, when Souji looked up, looked like he’d ( ... )

Yay, I caught this updating! anonymous February 17 2011, 20:20:09 UTC

I was literally thinking of this story an hour ago instead of writing an essay so seeing it updated = :D

I love the bit with Yosuke's worry/discomfort at the thought of Souji having been with someone else and that he might suck at this and Souji having to reassure him. It's a nice realistic response to Souji's ease with the condom and good bit of characterization in the midst of all the hotness, as was the part about Souji thinking 'maybe schoolgirl = Yosuke still wants boobs *worry fret*'. Not that I'm complaining about the hotness because that too is more than awesome (Yosuke being fascinated by fingering Souji and Souji just sinking down like that? hotAs a general compliment, not only for this story but for the other fills you've done*, you write some very, very good porn and it's very, very enjoyable to read. There's something kind of visceral about it (thank you, dictionary.com, for help me figure out the word I was thinking of), a sort of weight that sticks in the head, if that makes any kind of sense at all. In addition to ( ... )

writer!anon anonymous February 17 2011, 20:57:11 UTC

First of all, trying your hand at a dirty talk prompt? DO EEEEET! I cannot stress this enough. And not only because dirty talk is my #1 kink, hands down.
Dude, if my stuff can inspire someone enough to give some porn of their own a go I could not be happier. It's like...there's actually a point to writing all this smut, besides the point in the, uh, smut itself, if that makes any sense.

Second, thank you so fucking much, anon. Your comment warms me to the point of sweating and I am so grateful for you taking the time to point out things you enjoyed and telling me what you like about my writing. It means the world to me.
Visceral is a great, great compliment. The weight does make sense and it sort of ties into how it actually feels writing it too. It's a bit of a visceral process. I bet that doesn't make much sense though. 8D

I felt it was time to take a tiny, tiny step away from the pure PWP for a moment and dig into their heads at least a little and I'm very happy to hear it paid off. Thank you.

Just...thank you.&hearts

Indeed, ( ... )

Re: writer!anon anonymous February 17 2011, 21:47:32 UTC

Haha, I'll make some time for it. I've include it once or twice in a couple of fills but not at any significant stretch so making it the main focus will be a challenge for myself.

I'm pleased this comment made you so happy; hearing that made me feel like I'd gotten one on a story of my own so you're very welcome. ♥

I'm guessing you've done that Adachi molests Souji fill (since the writer!anon mentioned a love of dirty talk), Play House and Goal in Sight (since the same person wrote those), and the Souji/Yosuke D/s fill (beacuse the descptive style seems similar)? I might be wrong, and if so I have my embarrassment already prepared, but it can't hurt to ask since you're willing to answer. Plus, I always think it's neat to find out what else someone wrote. It gives you that feeling of 'oh, you did that too? awesome!' or 'oh, well now that it's been pointed out it's so obivous, duh, self.'

writer!anon anonymous February 17 2011, 22:09:09 UTC

Yeah who needs to write essays when you can write dirty talk? 8D Giddy to hear it and I look forward to seeing it! :DDD

&hearts&hearts&hearts

Ahaha you pretty much nailed them all, yes yes. Awesome. I've done a couple of tinyfills too but they're really not worth mentioning. Aw, man, I feel all flattered you got 'em all. 8D

Re: writer!anon anonymous February 18 2011, 15:53:02 UTC

I took a shot at this prompt: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11778502#t11778502. It was an experience. :o

<3

writer!anon anonymous February 19 2011, 16:04:57 UTC

lol I bet it must surprise you when I say I was the OP of that prompt. Gonna go read it now &hearts

Re: writer!anon anonymous February 18 2011, 15:53:54 UTC

I took a shot at this prompt: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11778502#t11778502. It was an experience. :o

<3

Re: writer!anon anonymous February 18 2011, 15:55:26 UTC

Uuuugh, double-post, screw you, LJ. >:O

Re: writer!anon anonymous February 19 2011, 17:43:05 UTC

DA

I hope this isn't defeating the purpose of the meme too badly, but -- could I maybe have the link to the Adachi molests Souji fill and the S/Y D/s fill? I love Play House, and I think I missed those two.

Re: writer!anon anonymous February 19 2011, 17:56:37 UTC

Not defeating the purpose at all! I know how hard it can be to track down a specific fill so I'm happy to be able to help people find what they're looking for.

Pretty Little Thing: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11795910#t11795910
Adachi molests Souji everytime he stays for dinner at Dojima's house

Souji/Yosuke D/s: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11634886#t11634886
Souji and Yosuke in a D/s relationship

Re: writer!anon anonymous February 19 2011, 18:32:29 UTC

Thank you so much, anon! ::reading them now::

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