and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*
Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!
SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )
SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )
I love the bit with Yosuke's worry/discomfort at the thought of Souji having been with someone else and that he might suck at this and Souji having to reassure him. It's a nice realistic response to Souji's ease with the condom and good bit of characterization in the midst of all the hotness, as was the part about Souji thinking 'maybe schoolgirl = Yosuke still wants boobs *worry fret*'. Not that I'm complaining about the hotness because that too is more than awesome (Yosuke being fascinated by fingering Souji and Souji just sinking down like that? hot).
As a general compliment, not only for this story but for the other fills you've done*, you write some very, very good porn and it's very, very enjoyable to read. There's something kind of visceral about it (thank you, dictionary.com, for help me figure out the word I was thinking of), a sort of weight that sticks in the head, if that makes any kind of sense at all. In addition to impressing me overall, it makes me want to go try my hand at that dirty talk prompt I was eyeing.
*I'm assuming here you've done a couple of others that I'm thinkng of and not just the rimming prequel, but even if I'm wrong I stand by this statement.
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Dude, if my stuff can inspire someone enough to give some porn of their own a go I could not be happier. It's like...there's actually a point to writing all this smut, besides the point in the, uh, smut itself, if that makes any sense.
Second, thank you so fucking much, anon. Your comment warms me to the point of sweating and I am so grateful for you taking the time to point out things you enjoyed and telling me what you like about my writing. It means the world to me.
Visceral is a great, great compliment. The weight does make sense and it sort of ties into how it actually feels writing it too. It's a bit of a visceral process. I bet that doesn't make much sense though. 8D
I felt it was time to take a tiny, tiny step away from the pure PWP for a moment and dig into their heads at least a little and I'm very happy to hear it paid off. Thank you.
Just...thank you.&hearts
Indeed, I've written a handful of other prompts. They're not secret so if there's one in particular you're wondering about or something, just ask. :)
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I'm pleased this comment made you so happy; hearing that made me feel like I'd gotten one on a story of my own so you're very welcome. ♥
I'm guessing you've done that Adachi molests Souji fill (since the writer!anon mentioned a love of dirty talk), Play House and Goal in Sight (since the same person wrote those), and the Souji/Yosuke D/s fill (beacuse the descptive style seems similar)? I might be wrong, and if so I have my embarrassment already prepared, but it can't hurt to ask since you're willing to answer. Plus, I always think it's neat to find out what else someone wrote. It gives you that feeling of 'oh, you did that too? awesome!' or 'oh, well now that it's been pointed out it's so obivous, duh, self.'
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&hearts&hearts&hearts
Ahaha you pretty much nailed them all, yes yes. Awesome. I've done a couple of tinyfills too but they're really not worth mentioning. Aw, man, I feel all flattered you got 'em all. 8D
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I hope this isn't defeating the purpose of the meme too badly, but -- could I maybe have the link to the Adachi molests Souji fill and the S/Y D/s fill? I love Play House, and I think I missed those two.
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Pretty Little Thing: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11795910#t11795910
Adachi molests Souji everytime he stays for dinner at Dojima's house
Souji/Yosuke D/s: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11634886#t11634886
Souji and Yosuke in a D/s relationship
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(Glad you liked Play House)
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(And I adored Play House! It's easily one of my favorite Dojima/Souji stories on the meme.)
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