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Feb 10, 2010 02:23

Stars and garters above! Isn't it time for a new post? The last one is just so... big now, isn't it? I don't know if even I could take it... ♥

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART FIVEAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly ( Read more... )

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Leap The Precipice (1/?) anonymous April 8 2010, 18:10:57 UTC

This is...so unbelieveably late that it's not even funny. And probably won't even be finished today, to add to my great and compounding shame.

Title taken from a song from the Trusty Bell ~ Chopin's Dream OST.

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At all given probability, there was only about a %7.4765 chance that he was doing it on purpose. No, make that %6.2584. In any event, the likelihood of him reciprocating was at about %0.1073, and while Souji could calculate numbers at the speed of light even he didn't think that he'd be able to predict the trajectory of an angry fist fast enough to dodge.

So he bit his lip, and waited. Tried not to stare, futilely, as his best friend hiked his T-shirt up around his neck and gyrated hips at him in a peculiar and frankly quite obscene manner.

"Yo, Souji, check it out."

I'm trying not to, thanks. Your hip is approximately 12.3 centimetres from my face. That's about 7.7 centimetres too close, give or take a few millimetres. Also, you're losing weight, again. I swear to God that if your jeans slide any lower down that ( ... )

Re: Leap The Precipice (1/?) anonymous April 8 2010, 18:59:49 UTC

AHHHH I'm smiling so wide that it hurts, anon! Your writing is a joy to read. :D (And I admit I kind of lol'd at the Hokkaido-bruise. Sorry Yosuke!)

Re: Leap The Precipice (1/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 05:33:40 UTC

OMG, anon, please keep writing. Crushing Souji is adorable.

Re: Leap The Precipice (1/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 08:00:26 UTC

Thinking-in-mathematical-terms!Souji is awesome, and your voice and writing style is excellent, filler!anon~ ♥ Thank you so much for filling for this prompt!

Most favorite parts are:
- "[...] while Souji could calculate numbers at the speed of light even he didn't think that he'd be able to predict the trajectory of an angry fist fast enough to dodge."
- "Q, quite frankly, could go fuck itself."
- And all the italics in Yosuke's second dialogue, LOL.

Hope you can find the time and inspiration to write the next part(s)! Thanks again! xD

Re: Leap The Precipice (1/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 12:14:45 UTC

Y-You think so? I'm terrified that everything that I write is exactly the same, actually. Distinctive writing voice be damned, I wish that I could write angst! ;__;

Also, I totally got the mathnerd!Souji concept from The Prisoner's Dilemma on page 3, so THANK THAT OTHER ANON, NOT ME. :D?

More of this forthcoming, hopefully. Maybe.

Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 13:23:21 UTC

"Ouch," he said out loud, sympathetically. And then tried to lean discreetly in trajectory with the air flow of the floor fan, so that he could breathe deeply of something that for once wasn't vetiver. "How did you do that?Outside, the cicadas were humming, and a little plastic inflatable pool was slowly being filled with water, the unsatisfactory speed at which that was occurring the reason why they were sitting there, in the 30.3C of the Dojima's living room, discussing a surface hemmorage that may or may not have been considered a national tribute ( ... )

Re: Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous December 30 2010, 02:46:47 UTC

"It was totally this baseball," Yosuke told him, excitedly, almost slapping Souji in the face as he elaborately hand-gestured

lol gdmit anon this is amazing YOU ARE AMAZING

Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 13:47:36 UTC

Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 13:51:36 UTC

JUST TRIPLE-POSTING BALLS HERE anonymous April 9 2010, 14:00:03 UTC

See subject. Internet is being a flaming dicking piece. Sorry, anons. D:

Re: Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 19:21:21 UTC

Loving this fill, anon =)

Re: Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 20:35:15 UTC

This fill is wonderful :)

I don't even mind that the internet screwed you over and posted it 3 times because I am happy to read it thrice! I love your pining Souji and distractable Yosuke and am so looking forward to reading more.

Re: Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 23:30:10 UTC

LOL I am so embarrassd about this posting fail that it's not even funny. I was so scared of losing everything that I had commentboxed that I didn't bother hitting the "back" button on the page. >___>;; And my Internet kept being all like, "Haha! You're not connected :D" until the instant that it actually was. THE WHOLE TIME, APPARENTLY.

Anyway, I'm sure that no one actually cares. I'll, er, go back to working on this, now.

Re: Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 9 2010, 21:32:05 UTC

Just the mention of 35C makes me dread summer. I don't know why I can't live in a place that doesn't have two extreme seasons. Damn you, Canada.

Anyway, I am loving this, because mathematical pining Souji makes me smile.

Re: Leap The Precipice (2/?) anonymous April 11 2010, 08:45:38 UTC

I think I love you my dear tripple posting anon, this is so adorable, I have a love for flustered!Souji so this is just perfect <3

Leap The Precipice (3/?) anonymous April 11 2010, 23:13:25 UTC

"And - " Yosuke frowned, perplexity disproportionate to the actual issue at hand. "And...I don't know. Some other guys. Tsuchiya, maybe, this other dude from 3-3. God, I hate those class 3 douchebags. Somehow they got all the jocks, this year, and they totally creamed us at Sports Day. I'm the fastest runner in the school, though - " He beamed, suddenly, and Souji felt his chest constrict with an odd assortment of anxiety, possessiveness, and pride; " - so that asshole Takano totally tripped me at the beginning of the relay line." He shrugged, and rolled his shoulders in a dismissive, lithe-looking line. "Oh, and Daisuke was there. The other day, I mean. He didn't play, though. Just stood on the sidelines and heckled us about soccer being the true national sport of Japan, like a freaking ass ( ... )

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