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Feb 10, 2010 02:23

Stars and garters above! Isn't it time for a new post? The last one is just so... big now, isn't it? I don't know if even I could take it... ♥

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART FIVEAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly ( Read more... )

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A Doll In His Hands (1/?) anonymous August 23 2010, 05:57:19 UTC

December 17, 2011.

What was the warning sign? Yosuke came up with a whole list of them, but it had all been in his head. He hadn’t meant any of it-no, he had meant it, but had taken it too lightly. Maybe there hadn’t been any warning. But still-Yosuke should’ve seen it coming, should’ve understood-he knew that he shouldn’t beat himself over it. It wasn’t his fault. No one was at fault. Except it was his fault. Or at least, someone was to blame. Someone had done wrong, someone, something. It hadn’t been a freak accident or spontaneous, sudden failure: it had been a choice, something that could have… his fault ( ... )

A Doll In His Hands (2/?) anonymous August 23 2010, 05:58:12 UTC

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Yosuke tossed his phone in the air, and caught just before it hit the floor. He should be doing his homework. If Chie knew that he was goofing off so bad-well, that was why they lived in different houses.

Besides, even she’d be put off by the rain. It almost hurt walking around in it. More like standing underneath a gigantic faucet than a gentle shower coming down over Inaba’s collective heads.

Lift, throw, catch. Lift, throw, catch. Lift- “Yosuke!” Teddie cried, pounding on his door ( ... )

A Doll In His Hands (3/?) anonymous August 23 2010, 05:59:23 UTC

Yeah, that was right. Except Souji was in the TV, so that left… so that left who? Yosuke didn’t want to do it. He said once that he didn’t mind playing second banana, but the truth was, he was too afraid of fucking up. Things in the TV were serious. They were for real. He messed up, everyone could end up dead ( ... )

Oh my goodness, this is awesome anonymous August 23 2010, 09:08:02 UTC

Your Yosuke POV is awesome. Like, really awesome. I'm shocked you haven't written him exclusively up to now. It's really heartbreaking, in a way. :(

Needless to say, MORE PLEASE. This is amazing and I will be dutifully letting you know so as long as you update! Can't wait to see the rest. <3 <3 <3

anonymous August 23 2010, 09:27:04 UTC

aaaa, this is so great! Seconding how good your Yosuke POV is; you can really relate to Souji being a total distant dick to him, while not coming off as Jerkji or anything. It's a very clever way to deal with him running around Social-Linking all the time.

Waiting eagerly for more!

Re: A Doll In His Hands (3/?) anonymous August 23 2010, 16:28:05 UTC

Your rusty is amazing. I'm torn over whether to keep reading this; it's well-written and I love your Yosuke already, but at the same time it's depressing me. D:

You're doing a great job, anon.

Re: A Doll In His Hands (3/?) anonymous August 23 2010, 22:11:10 UTC

Oh man, Yosuke's freakout was awesome. :D asdfsdfdf I love this so far, anon! I know we sometimes maybe like to make Souji a little friendlier than he can come off in the game around here, so I liked the way you draw him here -- he really is never the one to call anybody (although I suppose he can approach others to hang out with them and such). It's neat to see Yosuke's frustration with that.

ANYWAY. AWAITING MORE AWESOMENESS, just so you know. :>

A Doll In His Hands (4/?) anonymous August 27 2010, 05:25:00 UTC

December 11, 2011.

“Please pardon the intrusion,” Naoto said to no one in particular as she unlocked the door to Dojima’s house. Yosuke followed her shortly. Naoto called Yosuke earlier in the morning to tell him that she had the key to Souji’s house. Why her? Hell if he knew. Who knew what had been going through Souji’s head. Souji never told anyone.

He should’ve been the one to get the key, not Naoto. Not that Naoto wasn’t responsible and conscientious and… Fine, so she wouldn’t have lost the key. He could see why Souji trusted her. He just didn’t think that Souji should have trusted Naoto over him. Then again, if battle plans had been left up to Yosuke, it’d be just him and Souji, even though that was a dumb thing to do. There was strength in numbers, sure. But why was it that Yosuke only got Souji alone outside the TV once every two or three weeks ( ... )

A Doll In His Hands (5/?) anonymous August 27 2010, 05:25:38 UTC

The sad fact was that going into Souji’s dungeon was going to be the closest Yosuke would get to him in two months. They were so far apart that sometimes Yosuke thought that he was clinging onto the label of “partners” because he knew what would happen if he let go of it: he’d be that kid again, with half his class’ phone number and no one to call. Sure, he had friends, but no one understood him-no, they could. He had Chie and Kanji and Naoto and even Teddie now. He never called them or talked to them much because he always thought about Souji, Souji, Souji. So maybe it was time to move on ( ... )

A Doll In His Hands (6/?) anonymous August 27 2010, 05:26:30 UTC

“I have an older brother,” Yukiko said. Chie’s eyes nearly bugged straight out of their sockets. “He’s a lot older than me, and he was never very interested in the inn,” she said quickly. “A few years ago he had a falling out with my parents. I don’t think he’s been home since ( ... )

A Doll In His Hands (7/?) anonymous August 27 2010, 05:28:56 UTC

“But what if it is?” Chie said. “I-I mean, maybe we should’ve talked to him about himself a little more, instead of always being so ( ... )

Re: A Doll In His Hands (7/?) anonymous August 27 2010, 08:36:43 UTC

This is just AMAZING, Anon. You have me completely wrapped around your little finger. I cannot wait to see where you go with it. As always, your Yosuke POV is just perfect. I can hear Yuri Lowenthal in my ear as I read. :)

I also love your take on Souji. I'm finding myself as curious about what he really is like as the IT is! I hope your next update comes quickly, although boy do I know what the start of the new semester is like. <3

Re: A Doll In His Hands (7/?) anonymous August 27 2010, 20:12:28 UTC

I. LOVE. YOU. SERIOUSLY. safsdfdsafsd I cannot wait for more of this, it is brilliant. Once upon a time, I tried to write a fill with basically this premise (with what each of them see on Souji's midnight channel being different), but it never got off the ground. So I am extra pleased to be reading this. *____* &hearts So curious about Souji's Shadow, and I feel like you won't disappoint, anon!

Re: A Doll In His Hands (7/?) anonymous August 27 2010, 21:33:14 UTC

Can't wait to read more :)

Re: A Doll In His Hands (7/?) anonymous August 28 2010, 03:03:46 UTC

You're making this prompt work so wonderfully, anon. I'm completely taken by your Yosuke. Keep up with the good work ^^~

A Doll In His Hands (8/?) anonymous August 30 2010, 19:58:50 UTC

The entrance to the dungeon was stone or metal or glass. It did not reflect the bleak white fluorescent light attached to the walls. The lights were not clear and steady, but flickered from bright to dim with a sick blue-green tinge all the while. The doors were already open. As for the dungeon itself, it only seemed to go up. A long, tall staircase that went up for stories and stories, and at the top, a long, black box where Souji-no, where Souji’s Shadow would be waiting ( ... )

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