Prisoner of Love

[bachiari]

It hurt.

Every time he moved and sharp pain filled his senses, he was reminded of what had just happened.

“Ryo,” he let the name fall off his lips.  The name was oh-so-precious to him, but when had it started to bring a feeling of fear?

He slowly moved to massage his arm and he just knew there was going to be a bruise there in the

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[sakusako]

Uwa~ This was really good. How scary that Ryo started to become the character that he was protraying on LF. So scary.

I feel so bad for Tat-chan. Having to deal with that kind of emotional and physical pain. The ending made my chest tighten slightly. I feel bad for BOTH Ryo and Tat-chan.

Great job! This is really, really good. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. :]

[bachiari]

awww thank you so much!
hehe
it was rissa's idea XD.
it is D: and since now i have like an example from LF x] it'll become more scary.

awww D: well that's good! xD i was scared people will hate ryo ):.

Aww thanks! (: im gonna write fast with this one

[sakusako]

Hahaha. It's such a good idea, too. Hopefully you won't make Ryo too scary, ne? x]

Well, I'm upset that Ryo is treating Tat-chan that way, but there must be another explanation for his behavior change aside from being so absorbed into his Sosuke character, ne? I just hope that they'll have a happy ending. *crosses fingers*

Yay! I'll be waiting patiently then! I'm pretty excited about this story! ^_^

[bachiari]

hehe it's mostly rissa's though x] i owe it all to her <333

aww, yes, though i'm not sure i'll be abke to explain that well enoguh, but i will try! (:
and they will...maybe XD

Hehe yay!! (: it might take me awhile tho cuz i seem to have to rewrite everything to make myself happy at times. XD

[bioneuron]

wah....
how i can imagine the last friends drama is in real life...
and it is to ueda...
poor ueda...poor ryo too...
dont hit ueda like that...he just love you...

[bachiari]

aww
;+; know
poor uebo chan...
he just doesn't know what to do anymore :|

[bioneuron]

yes...he dont know why ryo is like that and what should he do...

i want to read more....
hope there will be update soon....
cant wait...

[bachiari]

): that's why ueda's in a whirl of confusion

haha ima write it now so don't worry :P

[resha_hime]

OMG GIRL!!!! FHKSHFBKIASHBFKBAVJKBASVJKBSVJKBSJKVBJVBJB VZ

I'VE MISSED YOU! D= WHERE HAVE U BEEN ALL THIS WHILE!?!?!?!?!?! I FELT LIKE I'VE LOST A SPAZZING PARTNER AKFHKSAFBKJASBFVJKASBFVKJABKJVSBAKJBSAJKBJKASBJKABVKAV

*calms down* Shu Ling said you'll be having holidays soon, so does that mean I'll be seeing you more? *hopeful* I've been bored out of my mind! And I'm really glad you still remember this fic because it's really really GOOD DAMMIT! *demands update, like NOW!* ^__^

I hope to be seeing you around LJ more often. Come back to us! *cries*

[bachiari]

OMG I MISSED YOU TOO
IM SORRY
IT'S JUST LIKE
AWWWWWWWWWW
IM HERE DON'T WORRY
JUST LIKE IN THE SHADOWS AND WRITING SLOWLY
AND LIKE IDK HAHAHA
DOING HW?

AWWWWWWWWWWW
yes of course <333
like it's called RISSA in my WORD DOCCUMENT
so i can never forget it!!!

HAHAA I WILLL <3333

hehe i will don't worry!!! (:

[resha_hime]

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AWWW I FEEL TOUCHED(?) COS THE FIC IS SAVED UNDER MY NAME. XDDDDDDDD

I KNOW UR BUSY AND EVERYTHING BUT YOU HAVE TO COME ONLINE MORE OFTENNNNNNNN ESPECIALLY WHEN SUMMER HOLIDAYS START (YOU'D BETTER OR I'LL KAHDFKAHFKASBGKABSKGBAKSGFBAKBFKBSAKFKASNBAKDGBABDG I'LL KILL KEI IN MY NEXT FIC OR SOMETHING D=)

I'LL BE WAITING FOR THE UPDATE OF THIS FIC! I'M ALWAYS AMAZED THAT YOU WRITE SO WELL AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE WHICH IS MUCH MOAR THAN I CAN SAY FOR MYSELF *bangs head*

HOPE TO SEE YOU AROUND REAL SOON. *hearts u*

[bachiari]

LOL
YES IT IS CUZ IT'S RISSA'S FIC
I ACTUALLY CONSIDERED CALLING IT CARRISSA'S STORY BUT THAT DOESN'T COREALATE WITHE THE PLOT THOUGH XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I WILL XDDDDDDDDD
TO SAVE KEEEEEEEIII
OMG!!! T_T
HAHA I REALIZE KOYAMA IS LIKE THE SOLE EXAMPLE OF ALL THE GUYS I LIKE - EVERYONE LOOKS LIKE KEI HAHAHAHAHAH

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
NO
IT'S CUZ I WAS INSPIRED AND INFLUENCED BY YOU 8D

AWWW
*HEARTS BACK*
WITH CAPS XD

[xlolitsnozomix]

HGAAJLIDGSIJHEJHLIRSJH OMG JESSIE SLJGSKJHSKLIJH UR BAAAAAAAAAAADCK LDSFKJBSKJHLSKRJH KYSSSSSSSSSSSSSSLFKHSDEIHJALIDEJHGLADEHJALSKIDEHAEIDHL SFGLKSH *glomps* i will READ THIS AND FLAIL SJGSKHGJEL!!!!!!!!!!!

[xlolitsnozomix]

whoops, sorry that looks really scary DD: it says:
"HGAAJLIDGSIJHEJHLIRSJH OMG JESSIE SLJGSKJHSKLIJH UR BAAAAAAAAAAADCK LDSFKJBSKJHLSKRJH KYSSSSSSSSSSSSSSLFKHSDEIHJALIDEJHGLADEHJALSKIDEHAEIDHL SFGLKSH *glomps* i will READ THIS AND FLAIL SJGSKHGJEL!!!!!!!!!!!"
*innocent smile*

[xlolitsnozomix]

XDFLHKSJHLSKIJ HGHOMGGGGGG SLJHLSKJHE POOR TAT-CHAN!!!! LKDFHLSRFJHSIDEKHJL WAAAAAAAH THIS ..dfklhjdlkrfjhsljh so scary ;-;
im scared for tat-chan SO SOOOO SAD T_______T
the first thing you write when u come back is a super angsty fic?! DDDDDD: BUT THATS OKAY BECCAUSE I WILL LOVE WHATEVER YOU WRITE BUT OMG THIS IS SOOOO HEART WRENCHING JESSIEKLJDGKLSJHSRFJH<333333333333333 T__T MOAR I WANT MOARRRRRRRR<333333333

[bachiari]

OMG YOUR SPAZZING
YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH IT MADE ME SMILE xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
LOL BECAUSE ANGST IS GOOD 8D
i've been influenced by anny XDD

awwwwww
hehehehee ima write it soon

AWWWW klsjdnglksdnglksdn this ARGH makes me happy lol <333

[snow_meow]

Such a thing is possible when a character consumes a person.
I wonder what happens now.

Will RyoDa move forward together or will they fall apart?

I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

[bachiari]

thanks for commenting! xD