Chlollie Fanfic: Love For Realsies, Chapter 14

Jul 13, 2010 02:52


After a loooong, looooong, much maligned wait...

SEXY TIEMS!!!  Whoo-hoo! :-D  This is the second time within the space of a week that the sexxors has shown up in Chapter 14.  Huh... *ponders*

Enjoy.  Unless you're under 18, in which case I urge you not to go under the cut.

Thank you!

By the way, there was an update posted just before this one.  ( Read more... )

chlollie, smallville, chloe, oliver, fanfic, series:funsiesseries, loveforrealsies

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kitmerlot1213 July 13 2010, 02:06:54 UTC
This chapter had it all: hot, passionate smuttiness and beautiful declarations of love. Well, Ollie declared his feelings but at least Chloe admitted to herself that she's falling in love with Oliver.

I'm almost afraid to see Oliver's reaction to Chloe's getting sick when he tells her he loves her :)

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babydee1 July 16 2010, 01:00:56 UTC
"I'm almost afraid to see Oliver's reaction to Chloe's getting sick when he tells her he loves her :)"

You should be. That's all I'm gonna say! ;-)

Thanks for your kind, sweet comments, Kathy!

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purple_moon123 July 13 2010, 02:20:29 UTC
difks... sjfkldsjf... jfksji... kjsfksfkjsiof ihkasfhuh ... kjfkjskfj.. ckcjiean iefh...

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was yeah!!!!!

She twined her fingers in his other hand and swallowed before answering. “I missed you,” she finally whispered, holding back tears as she stared up at him with wide eyes. “I missed you so much.”

Oliver, his eyes full of emotions she couldn’t identify, shifted until he was up against her moist warmth, and slowly pressed forward.

Chloe sighed deeply as he entered her, filling her not only in body, but also in mind, soul and spirit. She clutched his strong forearms as he advanced until he was all the way inside her.

“I’m home,” he whispered, resting his forehead on hers as he sank fully into her softness. “I’m home now.”

I have no words for how amazing this was. The emotion, the passion just freaking wow!!!

Everything she’d tried to avoid, everything she’d been determined not to subject herself to….

…it was happening again. Only this time, she had so much more to lose.This just sums up Chloe' ( ... )

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babydee1 July 16 2010, 01:31:09 UTC
"difks... sjfkldsjf... jfksji... kjsfksfkjsiof ihkasfhuh ... kjfkjskfj.. ckcjiean iefh...

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was yeah!!!!!"

So you liked it, then? ;-)

" have no words for how amazing this was. The emotion, the passion just freaking wow!!!"

You've got great taste. Your favourite paragraph is my favourite paragraph! :-D

"Is this just her emotions playing havoc with her or is there something else???"

*grins* Emotions. Chloe isn't pregnant. Yet. :-P

"Thank you!!!! Thank you!!! Thank you!!!! The chapter was amazing!!!! And I take back all the whining and pouting because this was perfect!!!"

...and now I can breathe easy for the next five minutes before the clamouring for an update begins again!

On a more serious note, I get so much joy from your reviews, so that you so much for all the love you've shown me - it's greatly appreciated! :-)

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fickery July 13 2010, 02:35:18 UTC
Oh, this was so sweet and emotional. Loved it.

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babydee1 July 16 2010, 01:31:57 UTC
Thanks, Fickery!

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chlavis333 July 13 2010, 03:49:39 UTC
Nice! Very intersting reaction. Uh, poor Ollie he tells Chloe he loves her and she gets sick. I did not see that coming. Great job!

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babydee1 July 16 2010, 07:14:16 UTC
Poor Chloe's having a panic attack. Love is so not what she'd planned!

Glad you like it, babes! :)

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selene2 July 13 2010, 04:29:34 UTC
Poor Ollie! *pets* ;)

Another wonderful chapter! I am loving this.

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babydee1 July 17 2010, 05:17:49 UTC
Thanks for your lovely words, Selene! So glad you like it. :)

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