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babydee1

Chlollie Fanfic: Love For Realsies, Chapter 14

Jul 13, 2010 02:52

After a loooong, looooong, much maligned wait...

SEXY TIEMS!!! Whoo-hoo! :-D This is the second time within the space of a week that the sexxors has shown up in Chapter 14. Huh... *ponders*

Enjoy. Unless you're under 18, in which case I urge you not to go under the cut.

Thank you!

By the way, there was an update posted just before this one. ( Read more... )

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Comments 36

slytherinpunk July 13 2010, 04:57:04 UTC

She blushed. “Why, thanks. This guy I’m dating, he bought it for me. He has excellent taste, I think.”

I loved when he complimented her on her shirt and she called him her boyfriend, or at least admitted to being in some kind of relationship with him =)

And I loved: “I’m home,” he whispered, resting his forehead on hers as he sank fully into her softness. “I’m home now.”

Such reassuring love! And love how the smut was tender and loving, but there was still a primal need for them to complete and be with each other.

I'm feeling very sad for Oliver right now with the way Chloe was reacting to his feelings with a panic attack and making herself sick over it.

(you said she had a three year contraceptive implant embedded in her before the wedding, so I'm not taking the bait on that one for anything outside of panic) But I would love to see you update soon. I really appreciate the double-post tonight, but you can't leave us hanging for too long for Chloe's response (I hope you can't anyways).

babydee1 July 17 2010, 05:39:29 UTC

"I loved when he complimented her on her shirt and she called him her boyfriend, or at least admitted to being in some kind of relationship with him =)"

She's gettin' there, she's gettin' there! ;-)

"Such reassuring love! And love how the smut was tender and loving, but there was still a primal need for them to complete and be with each other."

See, those are the very words I was looking for when I was writing this piece. Where were ya when I needed ya!? :-)

Seriously though, I love how you get to the heart of what I'm trying to get across, even when I don't quite get the words right. Slytherinpunk, you are my BrainTwin! :-P

"I'm feeling very sad for Oliver right now with the way Chloe was reacting to his feelings with a panic attack and making herself sick over it."

Poor Ollie. It's gonna get a whole lot worse for him before it gets better. :-(

"you said she had a three year contraceptive implant embedded in her before the wedding, so I'm not taking the bait on that one for anything outside of panic)"Once again, you're ( ... )

soapfan101 July 13 2010, 05:10:12 UTC

HOLY **** lol....I wasn't expecting that *patiently waits for new chapter*.....love it Dee........

babydee1 July 17 2010, 05:40:22 UTC

Thanks, Stacey - I hoped you'd like it! :-)

pompeypearly_v2 July 13 2010, 06:49:25 UTC

Chloe, you are so far beyond the point of return. She said herself that she was dating Oliver.

I think its come as a shock to her. I just hope she doesn't break his heart out of a need to protect herself.

and now you've left it on a cliffie I need more!!! Damn you!

babydee1 July 17 2010, 05:48:07 UTC

"Chloe, you are so far beyond the point of return. She said herself that she was dating Oliver."

Well, you know Chloe; one step forwards, 100-metre dash back! :-)

"I think its come as a shock to her. I just hope she doesn't break his heart out of a need to protect herself."

*whistles and glances innocently skyward*

"and now you've left it on a cliffie I need more!!! Damn you!"

Hee! I should start giving Short Courses in Evil Cliffie-dom; it's an innate skill, and I might as well make money out of it!

Thanks for the lovely comments, honey!

kryptolori July 13 2010, 10:44:40 UTC

Oh Dee can't believe you left it there, well actually I can lol so is she sick with fear or something else hmmm. AMAZING chapter, loved how the sensual the love making was. Can't wait for the next chapter!

babydee1 July 17 2010, 05:55:14 UTC

"Oh Dee can't believe you left it there, well actually I can lol so is she sick with fear or something else hmmm..."

*giggles* Fear. Just fear, hun. :-)

"AMAZING chapter, loved how the sensual the love making was. Can't wait for the next chapter!"

Many thanks for the lovely comments, I'm so glad you like it!

prophet64 July 13 2010, 10:47:16 UTC

WOW.... just amazing. Chloe is in so far deep, she just doesn't want to accept it.

Cannot wait to read more, evil cliffhanger lol, great job :)

babydee1 July 17 2010, 05:56:45 UTC

"WOW.... just amazing. Chloe is in so far deep, she just doesn't want to accept it."

Well, we all know that denial is her middle name. ;-)

"Cannot wait to read more, evil cliffhanger lol, great job :)"

I really can't help myself with these evil cliffies. But you'll learn to love them!

Thanks for commenting, glad you like it!