Chlark Fanfic: On The Inside, Chapter 11

[babydee1]

So I get a day off, and guess what I spend it doing? ;-)

Here's Chapter 11 of On The Inside.  Enjoy!  And if you're all really sweet and leave me lots of lovely comments, I might just post Chapter 12 before the end of the day, as well! :-P

Comments

[pompeypearly_v2]

see, this is what S9 SV needs at the moment - a nice Clark! I miss nice Clark!

I'm smiling sweetly and asking nicely for that 12th chapter....!

If i grovel shamelessly woulf we get a love for realsies update this week?

(i'm a cheeky cow, i know!)

[babydee1]

"see, this is what S9 SV needs at the moment - a nice Clark! I miss nice Clark!"

I miss him too, PompeyPearly. *sigh* I hope we get him back!

"I'm smiling sweetly and asking nicely for that 12th chapter....!"

...and you are soooooo gonna get it, bebe! ;-)

"If i grovel shamelessly woulf we get a love for realsies update this week?"

You'll be getting a Love for Realsies update today, if I can manage it! :-D I'm working on it as we speak. Fingers crossed!

Thanks as always for the lovely update. :-)

[pompeypearly_v2]

two updates as well as a love for realsies one?! you're spoiling us!!! (not complaining though!). Its good really, because it really isen't healthy how often i check your page for updates in a day!

i have been watching season 1 SV to remind me of the good old chlark days...

[babydee1]

"two updates as well as a love for realsies one?! you're spoiling us!!! (not complaining though!). Its good really, because it really isen't healthy how often i check your page for updates in a day!"

Aw, bless your little cotton socks! I really wish there were more hours in a day so I could get these chapters out faster. You have my mum to thank, because I dropped the kids off with her and fled to my sister's house to write in peace! So Grandma deserves all the credit for this one.

And if you're really lucky, I might have an update of The Perfect Gift as well - chapter's all written, just needs editing! :-)

The only one I've slacked off on is Crisis, but I have it written in my head. So fingers crossed on an update on that puppy by the end of the week!

[monicaop]

Love this... and how much I love the number of the apartment?? 5.22?? As in Vessel??? Sneaky :D I loved it!!!

You write this 2 really well, I'm looking forward to the rest :D hugs!!

[latetothpartyhp]

Thanks for seeing that! Dee is sneaky, isn't she?

[monicaop]

She's good!!! Great writer, sneaky, good with delivery also... so many labels :D, hugs!!!

[babydee1]

"Love this... and how much I love the number of the apartment?? 5.22?? As in Vessel??? Sneaky :D I loved it!!!"

Yay, I was wondering who would pick up on that! :-D

So glas you like it, Monica. Thanks for your lovely comments!

[kitmerlot1213]

This was just lovely!

I like Clark's pointing out that Chloe may have lost a lot of her life but she was slowly but surely taking it all back.

And good for Chloe for giving Clark a chance to mend their relationship.

Continued excellent work on this fic :)

[babydee1]

Thanks, Kathy! It's such a relief to write Nice!Clark, though it does depress me greatly whenever I remember the damage the show has done to Chlark.

Fingers crossed that they can somehow make it all better for us. And if they can't...well, there's always fanfic! :-)

[eternal_moonie]

*Cuddeles you*

I totally LOVE it!!

[babydee1]

Thanks, Moonie - you're such a sweetie! :-D

[latetothpartyhp]

You make it all better, you know that?

“Say ‘roomies’,” he instructed. She rolled her eyes and smiled, looking into the camera lens as he counted down.

“Roomies!” they chorused, their teeth exposed in wide grins as the camera flashed.

I want a copy of this picture! Someone needs to make a manip.

[babydee1]

You hear that, all you talented manippers? Who's up to the challenge? LOL!!!

Thanks for your kind comments, babes! :-)

[pompeypearly_v2]

i second that request! A manip is needed!!!