Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown XI: Baby Love, Chapter 4

Oct 05, 2014 01:34

Hi Y'all,

...Back with some more Baby Love.  It's a bit short, but we're getting there, I promise.  Enjoy!

Lovely banner by chleansmile. :-)


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chlollie, chloe, series, smallville, rated:pg13, babylove, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown

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madlenita October 5 2014, 01:36:49 UTC
Thanks for new chapter!!! I never was in labor so this chapter is very interesting to me....

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babydee1 November 23 2014, 10:38:49 UTC
Glad you find it interesting, hun!

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phoenixnz October 5 2014, 04:52:58 UTC
Can I say how much I adore this little 'verse you've created Dee? I love Ollie's eagerness and his concern for Chloe. Another awesome chapter my friend.

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babydee1 November 23 2014, 10:41:45 UTC
Thanks, Leanne! I just get so happy writing these two. :-)

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hellzz_on_earth October 5 2014, 06:21:43 UTC
Ollie's doing good being there for Chloe. What can I say bout our girl. She's awesome and helping Ollie just as much as he's helping her. Loved the flashback and the false alarms they experienced. Chlollie have come a long way and can't wait to meet Little Queen.
Thanks for the update.
Happy writing.

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babydee1 November 23 2014, 10:44:30 UTC
Glad you like, babes! Poor Oliver must be terrified, but they'll get through this just fine. :-)

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deliuzzo October 5 2014, 06:43:10 UTC

I felt every contraction of Chloe as if it were my own.
I liked it so much the flashback on the progression of their love. I had to reread it all over again .
It ' nice to dream , and your stories have this effect on me

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babydee1 November 23 2014, 10:51:30 UTC
Aww, thank you for re-reading everything again! I'm really fond of this series and the progression of their relationship from the start, they are such an inspiring couple. :-)

Glad you liked it!

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chlollifan84 October 5 2014, 17:39:36 UTC
An adorable chapter... I really loved seeing them sharing memories about the beginning of their relationship. It made me want to reread the first parts of this serie (and I've already read these four or five times:)). Can't wait to read the next part!!

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babydee1 November 23 2014, 11:00:04 UTC
"An adorable chapter... I really loved seeing them sharing memories about the beginning of their relationship. It made me want to reread the first parts of this series (and I've already read these four or five times:))"

...and I love you for it! :-)

They are very easy to write, and I'm glad you all enjoy my series so much. Thanks for your awesome comments... much appreciated. :-)

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