Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown IX, 'Fessing Up

[babydee1]

More Chlollie in the House, WOOT!

Back  with the next instalment of the BITB Series, titled 'Fessing Up.  My apologies for the white lines of text; it seems I have formatting gremlins tonight, and no matter what I try, I can't get rid of them.  Hope it doesn't hinder your enjoyment of the chapter, though.

Have fun!  Feedback is always welcome. :-)

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

AWESOME new chapter!!

*Cuddles You*

[babydee1]

*cuddles back*

Thanks as always, Moonie! Glad you like. :-P

[babydee1]

"The banter between Oliver and Lois was epic! I lol'ed so hard."

Big babies, the pair of 'em! :-P

"I actually like that you mentioned the age difference, not many writers do."

I don't know why; I love the slightly large age gap, personally! ;-)

"I wouldn't call Oliver (32/33) a cradle-robber by any means, but I think a lot of people forget that Chloe is only 24/25."

I think Lois was just being mean, trying to get her own back on Ollie for taunting her about the wedding! :-P

Glad you like, Steef! :-)

[purple_moon123]

I very much loved the sweet bantering between Chloe and Oliver. They are so adorable.

“Just…humor me, and sing with me,” he pleaded. “Just one little line. Come on, Chloe…please…?” he stuck his lower lip out, and made his chin wobble.

That last one was her undoing; she could never resist that chin. With a roll of her eyes and a reluctant smile, she gave in. “Fine.”

Resistance is futile when it comes to that chin!!!

“Honeymoon?” she bellowed with rage. “You got married again, just like that? Chloe Ann Sullivan, what the hell were you thinking?”

She couldn’t resist. “Sullivan-Queen, actually.”

Heeeee!!! I'm surprised that Oliver just for that didn't pick Chloe up and ran out the door to continue their honeymoon.
I kinda understand Lois' ire because I would be so pissed with my siblings for going off to get married and not inviting me. And since we are a Spanish speaking family you can bet the words we said would of been a whole lot worse!!!!!

Clark, ever the peacemaker, finally stepped forward and added his voice to the

[babydee1]

"I very much loved the sweet bantering between Chloe and Oliver. They are so adorable."

Big kids, the pair of them! :-)

"Resistance is futile when it comes to that chin!!!"

Trufax! :-P *points to icon*

"Heeeee!!! I'm surprised that Oliver just for that didn't pick Chloe up and ran out the door to continue their honeymoon."

But you know he was definitely tempted, LOL!!! :-D

"I kinda understand Lois' ire because I would be so pissed with my siblings for going off to get married and not inviting me. And since we are a Spanish speaking family you can bet the words we said would of been a whole lot worse!!!!!"

Eeeee!!! Spanish and Italian arguments are the best. All that gesturing and yelling...! Makes you wanna pull up a chair, break out the popcorn and enjoy the show!!! :-P

"Ohhhh ohhhh Every time the BDA speaks everything gets much worse!!!!"

Usually, yes; but on this occasion, he actually means well! *gasp* :-O

"WTF just happened because this is Clark right??? No he is a pod person?? No wait, he was mind whammied

[hellzz_on_earth]

Lois would not be Lois if she did not get upset for not being there for Chloe at her wedding. She's the big sister looking out for her baby cousin and she's feeling a little protective right now. I'm sure her and Oliver will be good again eventually. lol
Just love this series.
Happy writing.

[babydee1]

"Lois would not be Lois if she did not get upset for not being there for Chloe at her wedding. She's the big sister looking out for her baby cousin and she's feeling a little protective right now. I'm sure her and Oliver will be good again eventually. lol"

Eventually, hee! :-D

"Just love this series.
Happy writing."

Thanks, hun - happy to entertain you! *hugs* :-)

[greenteam4ever]

Aaaaw, I'm so happy to see them so happy. does it make sense? LOL
Really, Oliver singing cheesy songs, hloe smiling all the time..It's so great!
O, and Lo is being unfair to Oliver, she should listen to Clark (of all people!) - they really make each other happy :)
Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to more!

[babydee1]

"Aaaaw, I'm so happy to see them so happy. does it make sense? LOL"

Absolutely! :-D

"Really, Oliver singing cheesy songs, Chloe smiling all the time..It's so great!"

It is indeed! *sighs and grins at icon*

"O, and Lo is being unfair to Oliver, she should listen to Clark (of all people!) - they really make each other happy :)"

She will, she's just overreacting...but she'll be fine! :-)

"Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to more!"

Glad you enjoyed it, hun. Targeting Chapter 2 to be posted this weekend! *hugs*

Thanks for commenting!