Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown IX, 'Fessing Up

Apr 16, 2012 02:53


More Chlollie in the House, WOOT!

Back  with the next instalment of the BITB Series, titled 'Fessing Up.  My apologies for the white lines of text; it seems I have formatting gremlins tonight, and no matter what I try, I can't get rid of them.  Hope it doesn't hinder your enjoyment of the chapter, though.

Have fun!  Feedback is always welcome. :-)

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babydee1 April 19 2012, 00:40:26 UTC
"I very much loved the sweet bantering between Chloe and Oliver. They are so adorable."

Big kids, the pair of them! :-)

"Resistance is futile when it comes to that chin!!!"

Trufax! :-P *points to icon*

"Heeeee!!! I'm surprised that Oliver just for that didn't pick Chloe up and ran out the door to continue their honeymoon."

But you know he was definitely tempted, LOL!!! :-D

"I kinda understand Lois' ire because I would be so pissed with my siblings for going off to get married and not inviting me. And since we are a Spanish speaking family you can bet the words we said would of been a whole lot worse!!!!!"

Eeeee!!! Spanish and Italian arguments are the best. All that gesturing and yelling...! Makes you wanna pull up a chair, break out the popcorn and enjoy the show!!! :-P

"Ohhhh ohhhh Every time the BDA speaks everything gets much worse!!!!"

Usually, yes; but on this occasion, he actually means well! *gasp* :-O

"WTF just happened because this is Clark right??? No he is a pod person?? No wait, he was mind whammied!! Because there is no possible way for Clark to actually say something and not make things worse!!" I'll wait for the next part to see what he says to Oliver.

*grins* Well, since Clark had that heart-to-heart with Chloe on the plane when she was on her way to Miami, he's accepted that Chlollie are the real deal. And he wants Chloe to be happy, and Oliver makes her happy, so it's all good. :-)

"Well this is interesting not a lot of stories mention the age difference between Oliver and Chloe."

You know I like to bring up stuff like that! And I find the age difference rather seksy! ;-)

"Well Chloe and Lois are going to be okay since there isn't anything that chocolate cake can't fix!!!!"

Truer words were never spoken, Purple_Moon! :-)

"can't wait for the next part!!

Working on it! It's pretty much finished, but it needs tidying up. Fingers crossed I can get chapter 2 out sometime this weekend.

Thanks for another uber-review, my Sweet! I've missed you so! *smishy-hugs you* Oh, and I have the perfect story to go with the awesome banner you gave me. Stay tuned! :-P

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