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Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown VII - Sacred Words

Oct 19, 2011 02:48

How long has it been since I posted a Chlollie fic, huh? :-)

I didn't neglect y'all, really I didn't; I just had (and still have) a number of fic challenges to get through that have strict time guidelines. I have a brief reprieve, and I used it to pen some Chlollie goodness.

Ladies & Gents, I give you Beauty in the Breakdown VII - Sacred Words. Or ( Read more... )

chlollie, chloe, fic:sacred words, fic:beauty in the breakdown, rated:nc17, smallville, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown, sacredwords

Comments 23

jemmahawke October 19 2011, 03:06:02 UTC

Oh Dee, you have made me the happiest women on God's green earth!! This was EXACTLY what she and Clark needed to get past all the things that were mucking up their relationship.

I am anxiously waiting for you're next update (although I know it may be a while).

Great job, hun!

P.S. I'm still keeping my fingers crossed for a Oliver/Clark confrontation. I know he's only in this chapter, but a girl can dream... can't she?

babydee1 October 19 2011, 20:26:51 UTC

"Oh Dee, you have made me the happiest women on God's green earth!! This was EXACTLY what she and Clark needed to get past all the things that were mucking up their relationship."

I agree! Oliver's certainly been such a strong influence in getting Chloe to appreciate herself and not let people take her for granted. Go Ollie!!! :-D

"I am anxiously waiting for you're next update (although I know it may be a while)."

Thanks for being patient with me! This fic is actually breaking protocol and jumping the queue, but it's been fully written in my head for months, and i just can't hold it in anymore!

"Great job, hun!"

Ta! :-)

"P.S. I'm still keeping my fingers crossed for a Oliver/Clark confrontation. I know he's only in this chapter, but a girl can dream... can't she?"

I'll see if I can make it happen in one of the other stories in the series. Yes, you heard correctly - stories (plural). I know I started out saying that this would be a 3-part series, then 5, then 7...well, somewhere along the line, a few more stories ( ... )

rediney028 October 19 2011, 04:28:05 UTC

I feel anxious for the next update!

babydee1 October 19 2011, 11:30:25 UTC

No need to be anxious, rediney - it's all good news in this story, no angst in sight! :-)

Glad you like it, and thanks for commenting!

nienna87 October 19 2011, 05:56:58 UTC

Yay! hehe I'm excited for this!

I have to say this was my favorite part..."Now that she was no longer romantically invested in him, it amazed and amused her to actually see just how sulky, moody, mopey…and yes, how selfish he really was, especially where she was concerned"... because its so totally true! You wrote it perfectly and that is exactly how I see Clark. I love that her eyes are opened to it :)

and of course I'm excited to see her flying off to see Ollie :) Can't wait for more! Love you Dee! Keep up the great work!

babydee1 October 19 2011, 20:20:14 UTC

"Yay! hehe I'm excited for this!"

Squeeing on your behalf here, LOL! :-D

"I have to say this was my favorite part..."Now that she was no longer romantically invested in him, it amazed and amused her to actually see just how sulky, moody, mopey…and yes, how selfish he really was, especially where she was concerned"... because its so totally true! You wrote it perfectly and that is exactly how I see Clark. I love that her eyes are opened to it :)"

Ever since her big breakdown, she's taken off the rose-coloured glasses and has been able to see things clearly with regard to Clark - mainly that not getting to date him wasn't such a big loss. ;-)

"and of course I'm excited to see her flying off to see Ollie :)"

Me too. I can't wait for their reunion! :-D

"Can't wait for more! Love you Dee! Keep up the great work!"

Will do, and thanks for commenting, Nienna! :-) *hugs*

ica013 October 19 2011, 07:49:30 UTC

So excited to see an update! Fave bits "With Oliver, it's like he's your best friend now, and I feel relegated to the reserve bench. It's hard to get used to."

She nodded emphatically. “Yeah, having been in the exact same place for ten years, I know precisely how you feel,” she said with a wink. “But it gets easier, trust me.”" and "Yes she loved him warts and all"

I always get the sinking sensation when Chloe plans a surprise visit, so I am hoping it all kinds of a good surprise

babydee1 October 19 2011, 07:58:25 UTC

No sinking feelings necessary, hun. It'll definitely be a trip to remember, and for all the right reasons! ;)

Thanks for commenting!

ica013 October 19 2011, 08:03:57 UTC

Thanks for the reassurance. Update when you can (and on a side note, looking forward to your big bang fic)

babydee1 October 19 2011, 08:13:54 UTC

Thanks! It's a Chlark fic for the Big Bang; hope that's okay. :)

saurina October 19 2011, 09:43:04 UTC

Yay another chlollie story, you're so good to us Dee..:))

I loved that Clark took the time to apologize to Chloe and that he's finally seeing how right they are for each other. Ohh and who knew Clark could be such a daredevil sneaking in to the plane and all ha ha...

babydee1 October 19 2011, 20:17:14 UTC

"Yay another chlollie story, you're so good to us Dee..:))"

I try, LOL!!! :-D

"I loved that Clark took the time to apologize to Chloe and that he's finally seeing how right they are for each other."

Oh, the apology was long overdue, he's been such a douche until now!

"Ohh and who knew Clark could be such a daredevil sneaking in to the plane and all ha ha..."

Well, he's been breaking into places for years, so a little airport security isn't going to be a problem for him! ;-)

Glad you like, bebe! *hugs*