Part CCCVII - more graceful then an angle

Apr 04, 2010 00:48

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cheryl_bites April 4 2010, 10:20:35 UTC
Cho's name means nothing but bitch

Well! And to think people always wondered what language "Cho" was from. It turns out it's Fangirl for "girl Mary Sues don't like". Not a bad choice, Changs Senior.

And the "character" "profiles" for that story are gems.

Name: Isabelle "Belle" Walker
Looks Like: AJ Michalka but with shocking pink highlights

Name: Tiffany Stewart
Looks like: Kristen Stewart but with red highlights

Name: Megan Shay
Looks Like: Dakota Fanning with brown highlights

Name: Selena Russo
looks like:Haden Panettiere but with blue highlights

Are Suethors alien invaders attempting to study humanity? Perhaps they can't differentiate our physiognomy and need colour flags to help them.

"Um, well this is very interesting" The hat went quite as we had a little battle in my head. 'Where shall I put you? You seem to have interesting qualities, some I have never seen before, I think I shall make you your own house, for I know there will be more like you, what shall I call it. Ummm, lets see. O I got it' "I have made my decision ( ... )

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cheryl_bites April 4 2010, 13:09:52 UTC
Maybe she thinks Paris is in a desert. In the context of the rest of the fic, it's not the sort of mistake that would stand out.

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eir_de_scania April 4 2010, 15:32:54 UTC

Are Suethors alien invaders attempting to study humanity?

*** Keep it down, keep it down! and when those men in black suits and sunglasses calls, *don't open the door*!!

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eir_de_scania April 4 2010, 16:39:01 UTC
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shyfoxling April 5 2010, 18:01:18 UTC
Ron and Harry don't get on

I totally read this as "Ron and Harry don't get it on" and wondered how this was a change.

On this particular occasion she was wearing a pair of distressed and torn jeans, a black corset, black buckled ankle boots and a pair of black fingerless leather gloves with several black bracelets and ring.

Then she was ready for her 80s Winona Ryder audition.

Snape enjoys the hot mouth of his student sucking and licking his zone

So Draco was... in the zone?

"10 points for Slytherin…" he said
Suddenly the eyes of Draco widened and released his mouth from the cock

"Rubbish! That was worth at LEAST 50!"

Snape smiled and putted in one hard move his big member in Draco's entrance.

Now that's going up the down staircase.

Trained to find a bit of fun in Celestina's songs since about five

You can't find it naturally. It requires special training.

the Dark Lord was on the loose and wanted to killer her and her friends.

"It'll be a musical sensation.... we'll call you... The Killers!"

her buck teeth were now ( ... )

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cheryl_bites April 5 2010, 18:46:10 UTC
Snape enjoys the hot mouth of his student sucking and licking his zone

So Draco was... in the zone?

I don't know if you've ever played Sims 2 with Free Time, but I'm picturing Malfoy putting the cock in his mouth and promptly emitting that weird noise and glowing white.

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shyfoxling April 5 2010, 19:10:19 UTC
I think I'm glad I have no idea what you're talking about. (I have Sims 2 but haven't done much more with it than build a bizarre house and spend too much time trying to make sims of Severus, Regulus, Sirius, Lily, and James.)

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cheryl_bites April 8 2010, 11:12:24 UTC
I did that as well! Are you familiar with cloudlessnights? Basically, if you have Free Time your Sims can get so engrossed in what they're doing that they get "In The Zone", which EA have somehow chosen to represent by the Sim's glowing white and making a noise that I can only transcribe as "Whoosh-Zing". Makes perfect sense...

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004mog April 14 2010, 03:20:26 UTC
Some the changes I've made are:
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I don't own HP; anything you recognise is not mine.

Well, good for you, because I don't recognize a thing. By the way, can you give me directions to the HP fics? Nothing here looks familiar, so I'm pretty sure I've stumbled into the wrong fandom and I need to find my way back.

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