Some the changes I've made are: Severus and the Marauders are in the same year as Harry, Ron and Hermione. James Potter is Harry's twin brother. Severus is not in love with Lily (and so on...)
*** Sorry Jo, it's much too late to change it now.
On this particular occasion she was wearing a pair of distressed and torn jeans, a black corset, black buckled ankle boots and a pair of black fingerless leather gloves with several black bracelets and ring. (and so on)
*** Sweetie, when you arrive at Hogwarts you have to wear robes, and take off that gaudy jewellery. Or you will face a fortnight of detentions with canon!Snape.
She swiftly rejected Hufflepuff yellow as yellow looked hideous on her; she rejected Gryffindor red too as she didn't actually like it. Suddenly she saw herself in Slytherin green and stuck with that.
*** Then, she saw the sparkly pink of SPARKLYPOO and realised she'd found her true home.
"you're a little impatient, aren't you?" Snape grabbed his own cock. "You want this?"
*** Note to Sues everywhere: This is fanon!Snape. You will not, I repeat *not* get detention with him.
Hermione changed red in anger, while glaring at Neville. She held that glare for fifteen seconds.
*** But Neville glared back for twenty, making Hermione blush and look away.
"Nothing" I murmured and tried to stop the water
*** "And I wonder, still I wonder, who'll stop the rain..."
Some the changes I've made are:
Severus and the Marauders are in the same year as Harry, Ron and Hermione.
James Potter is Harry's twin brother.
Severus is not in love with Lily
(and so on...)
*** Sorry Jo, it's much too late to change it now.
On this particular occasion she was wearing a pair of distressed and torn jeans, a black corset, black buckled ankle boots and a pair of black fingerless leather gloves with several black bracelets and ring. (and so on)
*** Sweetie, when you arrive at Hogwarts you have to wear robes, and take off that gaudy jewellery. Or you will face a fortnight of detentions with canon!Snape.
She swiftly rejected Hufflepuff yellow as yellow looked hideous on her; she rejected Gryffindor red too as she didn't actually like it. Suddenly she saw herself in Slytherin green and stuck with that.
*** Then, she saw the sparkly pink of SPARKLYPOO and realised she'd found her true home.
"you're a little impatient, aren't you?" Snape grabbed his own cock. "You want this?"
*** Note to Sues everywhere: This is fanon!Snape. You will not, I repeat *not* get detention with him.
Hermione changed red in anger, while glaring at Neville. She held that glare for fifteen seconds.
*** But Neville glared back for twenty, making Hermione blush and look away.
"Nothing" I murmured and tried to stop the water
*** "And I wonder, still I wonder, who'll stop the rain..."
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