Comments | babb_chronicles: Part CCCVII - more graceful then an angle

babb_chronicles

Part CCCVII - more graceful then an angle

Apr 04, 2010 00:48

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plaid_slytherin April 4 2010, 00:15:35 UTC

Is it weird that the weirdest thing I took away from this was that the Suethor didn't make Toygers up?

gehayi April 4 2010, 02:22:38 UTC

They look a lot like heavily striped tabbies to me.

cheryl_bites April 4 2010, 09:24:01 UTC

..."Glittered"?

plaid_slytherin April 4 2010, 20:10:43 UTC

That's babb-worthy in itself, isn't it?

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la_fono April 4 2010, 03:01:46 UTC

I saw her eyes turn green cause she was scared. The lights started flickering and she started glowing faintly.

Red: Stop; Amber: Get ready; Green: Scared

uniswift87 April 4 2010, 03:10:31 UTC

Licking his lips again, “If it’s any constellation I’m gravely sorry for your loss,”

I'd like some constellation too. :(

cheryl_bites April 4 2010, 10:21:30 UTC

I think you can have a star named after you for £50.

vivian_lake April 4 2010, 07:34:30 UTC

He has emerald *pupils*? I know English language changes and evolves, but since when "pupils" and "irises" are interchangeable?

>>>embarresedand

Translation, please.

>>>I saw her eyes turn green cause she was scared. The lights started flickering and she started glowing faintly. She was beautiful.... Wait what am I saying?! I'm going out with Cho!
Cho's a slut
Belle is amazing
Cho's name means nothing but bitch
Belle's name means Beauty

Brainwashing, dirty and simple.
(I'm going to suechives on the search for Cho-Sue. For therapeutical purposes.)

cheryl_bites April 4 2010, 10:18:50 UTC

Some the changes I've made are: everything

Fixed that for you. *Reads story* Dear god, it's a Welsh!Sue! What did Wales ever do to deserve this?!

"Mister Potter and Mister Weasley! Pay attention or else I'm gonna put a potion in your pumpkin juice so you suddenly bark like a dog, and then I'm gonna buy a dog collar and a leash and are you two my pets" Snape said while looking angry at Harry and Ron

And to think Voldie only needed to say "Barkious Pftious"... Actually the potion is probably more dignified.

Neville stared at her, looking like a 'know it all', but just simply said, "then why won't you make some time then. I can tell you about Snape's knickers."

...?!? Oh. Is this after he turned the Boggart into Snape? Well, then I suppose Boggart-Snape would have been wearing his grandmother's knickers, and that's not a thought I really enjoy, so I'll stop there.

Also from that fic:

She stared at Ron while flattering her eyelashes.Bet she's regretting the "make your eyelashes really long but also sentient and grumpy" spell now ( ... )

vvvexation April 5 2010, 04:30:29 UTC

So he wants to suck her? Euck.

Let's be more specific: he wants to suck her "zone."